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帮帮改下 谢谢 As we all know, the environmemt around us is getting worse and worse . In some places we can’t see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Some people even have no clean water to drink. So I think we must do something to protect the environment.
As a green school student, what can we do? How to protect our environmemt?And I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags in stead of plastic bags when we go shopping. It helps to protect the environment. The second thing we can do is to reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can. We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy.We should try our best to reduce pollution and waste.
“There is only one earth”,I hope everyone will protect our environment well.
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As we all know, the environmemt around us is getting worse and worse . In some places we can’t see fishes swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Some people even have no clean water to drink. So I think we must do something to protect the environment.
As a green school student, what can we do? How to protect our environmemt?And I think each of us can do a little bit to help solve this problem.The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping. It helps to protect the environment. The second thing we can do is to reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can. We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy.We should try our best to reduce pollution and waste.
“There is only one earth”,I hope everyone will protect our environment well.
同学你好,短文很好,不需要太多修改。
最终答案:略