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来来来~帮我看看有没有语法错误
a new day,for 2010
i just want to pray.
pray for everyone,
or just fall in this woderful tonight,it is the last day of 2009.
i do not know what will be like in antother year,
Another year is coming…but it seems that i am still lose the way
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a new day,for 2010
i just want to pray.
pray for everyone,
or just fall in this wonderful night,it is the last night of 2009.
i do not know what will be like in the next year,
Another year is coming…but it seems that i am still wandering.
how could you fall in love with the laugh,i just want know ....
what happen,
Maybe the reason is
we just laugh about that.
and that is our destiny.....
see you ,09
sometime,i wii miss you
tonight→night,another→the next,i am still lose→i still lose或i am still losing,that'all,good luck for you!