作业帮英语作文改进
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老师请帮我看看作文还需要如何改进，谢谢！
Water Water is very important for us. It is everywhere around us, we need water to drink, to cook food and to clean ourselves. We can’t live without water, So we must save water. Then what should we do to save water? I think when we finish washing the clothes we can use the water to clean the floor. And we should have a shower instead of a bath because having a bath can waste a lot of water. In these ways, we can save much water. Water is necessary, Now please don't Waste Water!
Water Water is very important for us. It is everywhere around us, we need water to drink, to cook food and to clean ourselves. We can’t live without water, So we must save water. Then what should we do to save water? I think when we finish washing the clothes we can use the water to clean the floor. And we should have a shower instead of a bath because having a bath can waste a lot of water. In these ways, we can save much water. Water is necessary, Now please don't Waste Water!
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Water is very important for us. We must drink water everyday. We can’t live without water. Water is everywhere around us.At home, we use water to do many things ,just like washing clothes , cooking ,drinking and so on. At work, people use water to put out fires, to grow vegetables, to make things in factories and so on. We also can swim in the sea. Water is important for us, isn’t it? So ,we should save water from now on .
同学你好，你的作文看不完整，老师给你一篇范文，你参考一下吧。
最终答案：略
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Water is very important for us. We must drink water everyday. We can’t live without water. Water is everywhere around us.At home, we use water to do many things ,just like washing clothes , cooking ,drinking and so on. At work, people use water to put out fires, to grow vegetables, to make things in factories and so on. We also can swim in the sea. Water is important for us, isn’t it? So ,we should save water from now on .
同学你好，你的作文看不完整，老师给你一篇范文，你参考一下吧。
最终答案：略