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谁能为这篇英语作文详细地校正一下错误呢,语法.拼写等方面...
My favourite animal
My favourite animal is tortoise.Tortoise walk not fast.But I like the tortoise.Why?Because,tortoise is a cute animal.It have a short tail and a four short foot.It have a little head and a hard shell.They are forty-five little and cute tortoise in My home.They like to play in the water.When they afraid some thing.They wall run fast.They like to eat the fish.I often buy some small fish to them to eat.They can catch the fish fast.First,they fake(假) sleep.When the fish swim near they mouth.They catch the fish fast and bit the fish head.So,the fish die.They can eat the fish.In winter.They like to sleep in the sand.When they sleep,they don’t eat any food.Because they wall hibernation.But,when they are thirsty.They come out of the sand.So,we must give water to them to drink.
I love the tortoise.I hate the eagle.Because,the eagle often eat the tortoise with it sharp mouth.My favourite animal is tortoise.
My favourite animal
My favourite animal is tortoise.Tortoise walk not fast.But I like the tortoise.Why?Because,tortoise is a cute animal.It have a short tail and a four short foot.It have a little head and a hard shell.They are forty-five little and cute tortoise in My home.They like to play in the water.When they afraid some thing.They wall run fast.They like to eat the fish.I often buy some small fish to them to eat.They can catch the fish fast.First,they fake(假) sleep.When the fish swim near they mouth.They catch the fish fast and bit the fish head.So,the fish die.They can eat the fish.In winter.They like to sleep in the sand.When they sleep,they don’t eat any food.Because they wall hibernation.But,when they are thirsty.They come out of the sand.So,we must give water to them to drink.
I love the tortoise.I hate the eagle.Because,the eagle often eat the tortoise with it sharp mouth.My favourite animal is tortoise.
Tortoise walk not fast 最好用doesn't
But I like the tortoise 当中可用it指代
tortoise is a cute animal is acute 即可,你那样说累赘
It have a short tail and a four short foot.
应该改成has,因为主语是it
It have a little head and a hard shell.
句式结构和上面重复,可用with a little……来代替
They are forty-five little and cute tortoise in My home
应该是there are 吧 冠词应该用上
they afraid some thing. afraid前面应该用are
They like to eat the fish fish前面不加the
I often buy some small fish to them to eat.
应该用for them表示为谁买,并且两个to重复
they fake(假) sleep fake应该用副词,修饰动词
bit the fish head. bit应该用bite一般式
So, the fish die. They can eat the fish.
建议改成 then eat it ,否则太罗索了
it sharp mouth.My favourite animal is tortoise.
应该是it'sharp ……
文中wall应该改成all
段落格式不对
你的语气转折用的不错,希望你多加练习哦,更上一层楼
But I like the tortoise 当中可用it指代
tortoise is a cute animal is acute 即可,你那样说累赘
It have a short tail and a four short foot.
应该改成has,因为主语是it
It have a little head and a hard shell.
句式结构和上面重复,可用with a little……来代替
They are forty-five little and cute tortoise in My home
应该是there are 吧 冠词应该用上
they afraid some thing. afraid前面应该用are
They like to eat the fish fish前面不加the
I often buy some small fish to them to eat.
应该用for them表示为谁买,并且两个to重复
they fake(假) sleep fake应该用副词,修饰动词
bit the fish head. bit应该用bite一般式
So, the fish die. They can eat the fish.
建议改成 then eat it ,否则太罗索了
it sharp mouth.My favourite animal is tortoise.
应该是it'sharp ……
文中wall应该改成all
段落格式不对
你的语气转折用的不错,希望你多加练习哦,更上一层楼
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