作业帮检查这篇英语作文有何语法拼写错误
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检查这篇英语作文有何语法拼写错误
Last year,after we gurtuated form junior high school.We organized a journey to Fenghuang.
Phoenix is an old town which surrounded by mountains and river,It's
famous for the night in the town.when dark comes,with all the light lighted,a lots of people walked on the
road,the bar opened,the old town falled into happiness.
Not only the beautiful view attract me,but also I enjoy the time we play
together.we were shopping and visiting
the town in day.Singing and drinking in the bar at night.Moreover,we play
majiang and pork until next morning.
This is an unforgetable journey.I believe that I won't let it disappeared in my memory
Last year,after we gurtuated form junior high school.We organized a journey to Fenghuang.
Phoenix is an old town which surrounded by mountains and river,It's
famous for the night in the town.when dark comes,with all the light lighted,a lots of people walked on the
road,the bar opened,the old town falled into happiness.
Not only the beautiful view attract me,but also I enjoy the time we play
together.we were shopping and visiting
the town in day.Singing and drinking in the bar at night.Moreover,we play
majiang and pork until next morning.
This is an unforgetable journey.I believe that I won't let it disappeared in my memory
唉喺,你这个句子断的都不对么,英文一句话只有一个主干,也就是只有一个主谓宾,就算是很长很长的复句,它的句子主干部分还是一个,其他的谓语动词都要用分词形式来表示的,具体用什么分词还要根据句子来用.
你看,你作文中的第一个句子,完全就是两个短语,没有主谓宾哦,可能你本来是跟后面一个句子连一起的吧,误打了个句话把时间跟句子给断开了,把两个句子连起来就是,最好把after后面的放句子最后,不然时间状语看过去很重复.还有,你“凤凰”前后的两个地名翻译统一一下吧?你看,你and river 后面又是一个逗号,但是你后面明明是另外一个主谓宾的完整句子啊,你可以把它变成定语从句好了,it's 改成which is就挺好的呀.
哎呀,粗看了一下,明天继续哈,姐姐睡觉去了,困死.
你看,你作文中的第一个句子,完全就是两个短语,没有主谓宾哦,可能你本来是跟后面一个句子连一起的吧,误打了个句话把时间跟句子给断开了,把两个句子连起来就是,最好把after后面的放句子最后,不然时间状语看过去很重复.还有,你“凤凰”前后的两个地名翻译统一一下吧?你看,你and river 后面又是一个逗号,但是你后面明明是另外一个主谓宾的完整句子啊,你可以把它变成定语从句好了,it's 改成which is就挺好的呀.
哎呀,粗看了一下,明天继续哈,姐姐睡觉去了,困死.