英语翻译Check it out仔细听着It's eleven-thirty my hand is getting di

英语翻译
Check it out仔细听着
It's eleven-thirty my hand is getting dirty
现在是11点30 我的手看不清了
Snatchin' up things that probably can't be waitin'抓住它 时间不会等你
Now this is a vision of a violent life
现在这是被生活扭曲的幻觉
Livin' by a guard and totem of the night 作为夜晚的象征物守卫者活着
I'm slammin' doors 2-4-5 'n pullin' the keys
我关上245号门 拔出钥匙
Now these are the traged valuable luxuries to me现在对我来说,这些都是有价值的奢侈
In the early dawn before you yawn
在你瞌睡之前你倒下了
I've been there swiped you and then I'm gone
我在哪里猛击了你 然后离开了
Now it's six-o-clock my heart tic-tacs
现在是6点整 我的心脏滴嗒作响
A black sadden bag full of badass rocks
一个黯黑色的包里装满了该死的钻石
My identity has to bexposed
我的身份暴露无疑
Stealing from the spot that I chooly chosed
我以偷窃被指认 查理被关了起来
I lose and enfuse my choice to chose
我错失并毁掉了去选择的机会
Now I'm sick and I'm fallin' deeper in the mess
现在我很不爽深陷于困境之中
There's no hope for me see
我看不到一丝希望
My path has been chosen I'm Johnny B
我的道路已经选择了 我是Johnny B
CHORUS
合唱:
Johnny B how much there is to see
JOHNNY B你还能看到多少希望
Just open your eyes and listen to me
睁开眼睛听我说
Straight ahead a green light turns to red
一道普通的绿光变成红色
Ooh why can't you see ooh Johnny B
为什么你不能看一下 Johnny B
CHORUS
合唱.
the situation's tight
在这棘手的状况中
You are billin' by the night
你成为了这夜晚的账单
Can't choose between the wrongs and the rights
徘徊在对与错之间
I'm searchin' for the clues yo-what am I gotta do
等等 我可以为寻找证据做些什么
I got the habit to take valuable things from you
我习惯于从你哪里得到一些有价值的东西
Here I stand and I'm physically trapped by my tent
我站在这里身体却被困在住处
Drifting漂流 northern breeze微风 triumphal凯旋 is this adman
微微的北风卷起的吹积物是这个广告人
A lonely path when I stand alone
当我站在无助的道路上
A round mothern flexion弯曲 曲折 bendin'使曲从 by my own
Here I lay down into certain deaths
我躺在这里进入无情的死亡
Two spirits calls grabs my very last breath
两个灵魂称夺取了我最后的呼吸
Sometimes I wish reveseness in my path
有时我希望在路上徘徊
A simple guest or a simple laugh
一个简单的待客和笑容
But I'm evil dirty and mean
但是我邪恶肮脏而且吝啬
Two pounds blood pasts through my bloodstream血流
Frightened huh you should be
使我害怕 哈 你应该的
Who am I I'm Johnny B
我是谁 我是Johnny B
CHORUS.
Here we go here we go now check the flow
（一起来）我们查看这流血
Here we go Johnny B is in control
Johnny B是凶手
REPEAT
It's a sleepless night he's callin' your name
这是个他呼唤你名字的难眠之夜
It's a lonely ride I know how you saw him
这是个孤独的遁逃我知道你如何看到他的
Again and again he's dressin' his dreams
一次又一次身披他的梦想
Yeah Johnny my friend it's not what it seems
yeah Johnny我的朋友并不是你看到的那样
请找出语法错误.误解并纠正

Check it out仔细听着 （Listen carefully；Check it out意为：检查出来）
It's eleven-thirty my hand is getting dirty
现在是11点30 我的手看不清了（It is 11:30 and I can not see the hand of the；MY因用于句首或逗号之后啊!你这样翻译出来就是“这是1130年我的手越来越肮脏”这个意思了啊!）
Snatchin' up things that probably can't be waitin'抓住它 时间不会等你(Seize the time it will not wait for you；“wait”的过去分词应该不是“waitin”吧,按你这句翻译出来也不是这个意思啊!)
Now this is a vision of a violent life现在这是被生活扭曲的幻觉 (This is now being distorted life of illusion；时间状语不能放在前面!你这句话翻译出来的意思也不对啊!变了味啊!变成“现在这是一个理想的暴力生活”这个意思了)
Livin' by a guard and totem of the night 作为夜晚的象征物守卫者活着 （As a night guard symbols are alive；你那样翻译出来意思就变了啊!变成了“美好生活由一名后卫和图腾的夜晚”）
I'm slammin' doors 2-4-5 'n pullin' the keys
我关上245号门 拔出钥匙 （正确的应该是I closed the door, pull out the 245 key； “pullin'”好像没见过啊! ）
Now these are the traged valuable luxuries to me现在对我来说,这些都是有价值的奢侈 （应该这样写“Now to me, these are valuable luxury”你这样改变了他原来的意思了,变成“现在,这些都是宝贵的奢侈品”价值这个词不用刻意的写出来啊）
In the early dawn before you yawn
在你瞌睡之前你倒下了 （You sleepy before you fell；在这里不能用early的在.之前应该是before）
I've been there swiped you and then I'm gone
我在哪里猛击了你 然后离开了（Where do I hit you and then left the；“I've been 不适合用于此句”句子的时态不对）
Now it's six-o-clock my heart tic-tacs
现在是6点整 我的心脏滴嗒作响 （It is 6:00 my whole heart ticking sound,直接用进行时即可表明现在一词“tic-tacs ”应用V+ing形式,表示现在进行时）
A black sadden bag full of badass rocks
一个黯黑色的包里装满了该死的钻石 （A dark black bag filled with bloody diamonds；不必用过去分词,句子的时态错误）
My identity has to bexposed
我的身份暴露无疑 （to 后面应加动词原形!）
Stealing from the spot that I chooly chosed
我以偷窃被指认 查理被关了起来（I identified with theft and Charlie was up；句子的时态错误,主语应放在句首）
I lose and enfuse my choice to chose
我错失并毁掉了去选择的机会 （I missed and lost the chance to choose；这里不适合用lose,因为lose意为为：遗失）
Now I'm sick and I'm fallin' deeper in the mess
现在我很不爽深陷于困境之中 （Now I am out of sorts in deep trouble）
There's no hope for me see
我看不到一丝希望 （I do not see a ray of hope 主语前置）
My path has been chosen I'm Johnny B
我的道路已经选择了 我是Johnny B （I have chosen the path that I am a Johnny B）
CHORUS
合唱: （Chorus；后面小写）
Johnny B how much there is to see
JOHNNY B你还能看到多少希望 （JOHNNY B you can see how much hope）
Just open your eyes and listen to me
睁开眼睛听我说 (Open your eyes and listen to me)
Straight ahead a green light turns to red
一道普通的绿光变成红色 (An ordinary green light turns red)
Ooh why can't you see ooh Johnny B
哦 为什么你不能看一下 哦 Johnny B (Oh why can not you take a look at Oh Johnny B)
CHORUS (Choir.)
合唱.
the situation's tight
在这棘手的状况中 (In this difficult situation)
You are billin' by the night
你成为了这夜晚的账单 (You become the night of the bill)
Can't choose between the wrongs and the rights
徘徊在对与错之间
I'm searchin' for the clues yo-what am I gotta do
等等 我可以为寻找证据做些什么
I got the habit to take valuable things from you
我习惯于从你哪里得到一些有价值的东西
Here I stand and I'm physically trapped by my tent
我站在这里身体却被困在住处
Drifting漂流 northern breeze微风 triumphal凯旋 is this adman
微微的北风卷起的吹积物是这个广告人
A lonely path when I stand alone
当我站在无助的道路上
A round mothern flexion弯曲 曲折 bendin'使曲从 by my own
Here I lay down into certain deaths
我躺在这里进入无情的死亡
Two spirits calls grabs my very last breath
两个灵魂称夺取了我最后的呼吸
Sometimes I wish reveseness in my path
有时我希望在路上徘徊
A simple guest or a simple laugh
一个简单的待客和笑容
But I'm evil dirty and mean
但是我邪恶肮脏而且吝啬
Two pounds blood pasts through my bloodstream血流
Frightened huh you should be
使我害怕 哈 你应该的
Who am I I'm Johnny B
我是谁 我是Johnny B
CHORUS.
Here we go here we go now check the flow
（一起来）我们查看这流血
Here we go Johnny B is in control
Johnny B是凶手
REPEAT
It's a sleepless night he's callin' your name
这是个他呼唤你名字的难眠之夜
It's a lonely ride I know how you saw him
这是个孤独的遁逃我知道你如何看到他的
Again and again he's dressin' his dreams
一次又一次身披他的梦想
Yeah Johnny my friend it's not what it seems
yeah Johnny我的朋友并不是你看到的那样
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