评价一下我的英语作业,说一下有哪些改善

评价一下我的英语作业,说一下有哪些改善
technology
According to the first article,we have
taken in the effect of global warming and Soay sheep are shrinking.In this
article,the "young mum effect" explains why Soay sheep have not been
getting bigger.In addition,due to climate change,soay sheep is becoming less
challenging,so young ewes produce smaller offspring than expected.The global
warming not only affect soay sheep,but also will also affect our.We have to
solve this problem,we should encourage afforestation and the protection of
forests.To prevent the occurrence of greenhouse effect,thereby without global
climate change.
The second article tells us,technology
result in a detrimental effect.Shot-term benefits can lead to the tragedy of
the commons.Many countries use technology to solve problems,but the
commercial fishing in the world's oceans leads to many fisheries is being
overfish and are threatened with collapse.Because technology made life more
comfortable,stimulating and free of drudgery,more and more countries will use
technology.While we are enjoying the conveniences of the science and
technology,we should keep a watching eyes on those negative practices.So we
should properly use it.
In the third article,the public worry
about the safety of science.The development of science and technology,but
some people would like to stop these changes.Modern society is not the
development of science and technology.All it would do is to slow down the rate
of change,and that the changes they make are in the right directions.The
public attitudes toward science that they expect the steady increase in the
standard of living meanwhile they distrust science.We can't wait for experts,
we should learn science and read some books about science,know more about
science.
In modern society,along with the constant
improvement and development of technology,people can worry about the safety of
technology.But this situation is inevitable.Aim to reduce the problems it has
caused.Then the benefits of these advances will out weigh the serious
problems.In today's society.People and technologies are closely related,so
science and technology catches and holds our concern,for it affects us and
will affect our later.

要我英文评论还是中文评论.算了还是英文吧.i can tell this essay is mainly about tech.it is pretty good,your statement is really clear.some improvement suggestions:something wrong with the last sentence,...
再问： 英文中文都可以 谢谢
再答： 读懂了吧。。。这不就是？
再问： 读懂了 最后一句能帮我改一下吗?