急求一英语作文!需要一片以“My holiday"为题的初一英语作文,至少60个单词!我这个十一是去上海玩的,第一天到外

急求一英语作文!
需要一片以“My holiday"为题的初一英语作文,至少60个单词!我这个十一是去上海玩的,第一天到外滩,第二天到上动物园然后又去城隍庙!和这些近点!

A visit to Beijing
On Oct 1st,the National Day of China this year,dad,mom and I went to Beijing on a package tour arranged by the travel agency.I was so happy because it's the first time that I visit the Great Wall.
The Great Wall,one of the greatest wonders of the world,was enlisted in the World Heritage in 1987.Just like a gigantic dragon,it winds up and down across deserts,grasslands,mountains and plateaus stretching approximately 6,700 kilometers from east to west of China.With a history of more than 2000 years,some sections are now in ruins or even entirely disappeared.However,it is still one of the most appealing attractions all around the world owing to its architectural grandeur and historical significance.
We took the bus to arrive at the foot of the Great Wall.There are so many people who had been here.I began to climb the dreamed Great Wall.At first I did not feel tired,but after I stepped a thousands of steps I felt tired and thirsty.At last,we stood on the highest point of the Great Wall.A Chinese saying goes like that,“you are not a real hero until you have climbed the Great Wall”.The landscape outside and inside the Great Wall was so beautiful in this autumn!