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英语作文:根据已给出的文章,继续编写
Please talk adout where you would like to visit(10 points)
内容:I‘d like togo a beautiful place .I think it would be Pairs .If I want there...
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给你纠正一下错误.你的意思是说如果你想去一个美丽的地方,你会去巴黎.对吧.不过最后一句你写的是中式英文,应该改为 If I want to go there.前面一句漏了一个to 应是go to a beautiful place.编写如下.不晓得你要多少个单词.
I‘d like to go to a beautfiul place .I think it would be pairs ,If I want to go there,I will take a camera with me ,as we all know that pairs is one of the most romantic cities in the world,so I can take photos of couples in such surroundings.Needless to say,these photos have great collection value.The Mystery of Notre Dame attracted me very much,I am extremely want to see what it is .In addition,the Eiffel Tower is very spectacular.I love it very much and wish to Stand in the tower top to enjoy the scenery around.