作业帮帮忙看下我的翻译对不对
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帮忙看下我的翻译对不对
曾经有一份真诚的爱情摆在我的面前,我没有珍惜,等到失去的时候才追悔莫及,人世间最痛苦的事情莫过于此.如果上天能够给我一个重新来过的机会,我会对那个女孩子说三个字：‘我爱你’.如果非要给这份爱加上一个期限,我希望是,一万年
我的翻译是:
Once,a sincerely love at me front,but my not cherish.I repelit it until i lost it.If God give me a opportunity,my be bound to with the girl speak three world:I love you,if must to me for the love a time,i want is a ten thousand year.
有句话忘打了，这才是完整版本：
Once,a sincerely love at me front,but my not cherish.I repent it until i lost it.On this world most painful nothing better than this.If God give me a opportunity,my be bound to with the girl speak three word:I love you,if must to me for the love a time,i want is a ten thousand year.
曾经有一份真诚的爱情摆在我的面前,我没有珍惜,等到失去的时候才追悔莫及,人世间最痛苦的事情莫过于此.如果上天能够给我一个重新来过的机会,我会对那个女孩子说三个字：‘我爱你’.如果非要给这份爱加上一个期限,我希望是,一万年
我的翻译是:
Once,a sincerely love at me front,but my not cherish.I repelit it until i lost it.If God give me a opportunity,my be bound to with the girl speak three world:I love you,if must to me for the love a time,i want is a ten thousand year.
有句话忘打了，这才是完整版本：
Once,a sincerely love at me front,but my not cherish.I repent it until i lost it.On this world most painful nothing better than this.If God give me a opportunity,my be bound to with the girl speak three word:I love you,if must to me for the love a time,i want is a ten thousand year.
如果正确是100分,看的懂是60分
大概你的翻译是65分
我把你的翻译改了一下,是比较简单的直译：
Once I had a sincere love,whill I did not cherish it,and I found it had been too late for me to repent untill the moment of losing it.That was the most painful thing on the face of the earth.If the God could give me one more chance,I may say three words to the girl,"I love you".If it must add the love with a time limit,I should like to be 1,000 years.
大概你的翻译是65分
我把你的翻译改了一下,是比较简单的直译：
Once I had a sincere love,whill I did not cherish it,and I found it had been too late for me to repent untill the moment of losing it.That was the most painful thing on the face of the earth.If the God could give me one more chance,I may say three words to the girl,"I love you".If it must add the love with a time limit,I should like to be 1,000 years.