请帮忙看一下下面几篇文章有什么语法错误!或有什么好的建议!十万火急!请在第二天中午12点前回答!

请帮忙看一下下面几篇文章有什么语法错误!或有什么好的建议!十万火急!请在第二天中午12点前回答!
Online chatting
Nowadays,Internet is so widely used in our daily
life,such as internet chatting,shopping,games and rideos.(前面为题目）But among them,chatting online is my
favourite.
The only rule of chatting online is
besafe.Some bad person would steal your information and to do something
bad.You wouldget into trouble.We should chatting carefully.
Most of teenagers like chatting
online.Inone way,it’s good because we can learn something from the other
person.But in anotherway,it’s bad because some of them may lost themselves in
the Internet.
So,we should deal with the concern withthe
chatting online,in my opinion.
Winter Holiday
Winter holiday is one of the best time in a year
with a Chinese Spring Festival in it.(前面为题目）
The most important and most interesting thing is
enjoying Spring Festival.Inthe Spring Festivel,you can enjoy the fireworks ,the
lantern
and so on.
On NewYear's Eve,all the family
people get together to have a big dinner in theresturant.During the dinner we
have a small talk and play some games.We saysome good hope to each other.For
example,keep good healthe,try your best to doeverything,have a good mood in
this year,happy everyday and so on.
People enjoytheir winter holiday
especially Spring Festival.

1 The only rule of chatting online is be safe 请在be 前面加to 变成to be!
2 Some bad person 请改成persons或者改成people（最好改成people）
3 steal your information and to do something 中的 to do something变成 do something
4 We should chatting carefully.chatting 改成chat
5 something from the other person 去掉the
6 may lost themselves in the Internet.lost变成lose
7 So,we should deal with the concern with the chatting online,in my opinion.这句真心没看懂,肯定有问题但是不知道你的初衷
8 Winter holiday is one of the best time in a year.请在前面加winter前面加the （题目这也有语病啊亲...）
9 The most important and most interesting thing is enjoying Spring Festival.请将enjoying变成to enjoy
10 the lantern 鉴于你前面的fireworks 应该改成lanterns
11 say..hope这个不伦不类 改成make..hope好些
希望能帮上您...
再问： 7中意思是我们应该处理好网聊的关系；9中say hope在哪呢另：又有两篇：（希望看的到）
再答： 您的问题是无穷无尽的么.....We say some good hope to each other 这里的say ...some hope 您的问题就是很多词很明显是查字典直接套上去的额 不好解释...您这里我又看到了海量的错误，但是感觉有点累....
再问： 能快点吗？我真的很急，还要把它们背下来！ 还有，文章就这就四篇而已·。