作业帮短文改错when i was in high school i tried to apply to part-time
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when i was in high school i tried to apply to part-time jobs to earn money to spend for my education .those jobs were bored and I hated them .I had to study and worked at the same time .I worked for a crew in one of the food chains.even though I worked for a few hours I couldn't stand the fact I stood for five hours cleaning table,throwing trash ,getting orders at the same time .whew!After work I need ed do my homework and rest .anyway this experience was tiring and would be beneficial to my futher for life ..每个都要说明原因
when i was in high school i tried to apply to part-time jobs to earn money to spend for my education .those jobs were bored and I hated them .I had to study and worked at the same time .I worked for a crew in one of the food chains.even though I worked for a few hours I couldn't stand the fact I stood for five hours cleaning table,throwing trash ,getting orders at the same time .whew!After work I need ed do my homework and rest .anyway this experience was tiring and would be beneficial to my futher for life ..每个都要说明原因
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when i was in high school i tried to apply (for) part-time jobs to earn money to (pay) for my education . those jobs were (boring) and I hated them . I had to study and (work) at the same time . I worked (as) a crew in one of the food chains. even though I worked for a few hours I couldn't stand the fact (加入that) I stood for five hours cleaning (tables), throwing trash , getting orders at the same time .whew! After work I needed (加入to) do my homework and rest . anyway this experience was tiring (but) would be beneficial to my futher (去掉for) life ..
1. apply for sth 申请某事；apply to sb 向某人申请
2. pay money for sth 为某事付钱；spend money on sth 花钱在某事上
此次还有另外一种改法：即spend不变,把for改成on
3. bored意思是“感到无聊/厌倦的”,而boring意思是“令人感到无聊/厌倦的”
形容work当然用boring
4. work和study并列,用在had to后面,所以都用动词原形
5. work as...意思是“任...职”,而work for...意思是“为...工作/效力”
6. the fact后面是一个以that引导的同位语从句,此时that不能省略
7. table是可数名词,用在句子当其前没有任何修饰词时,必须用复数形式
8. need to do sth 需要做某事（needed说明need是行为动词,其后不能直接加动词原形）
9. 前后句意之间明显为转折,所以用but
10. further为形容词,直接修饰名词life,中间无需加of
when i was in high school i tried to apply (for) part-time jobs to earn money to (pay) for my education . those jobs were (boring) and I hated them . I had to study and (work) at the same time . I worked (as) a crew in one of the food chains. even though I worked for a few hours I couldn't stand the fact (加入that) I stood for five hours cleaning (tables), throwing trash , getting orders at the same time .whew! After work I needed (加入to) do my homework and rest . anyway this experience was tiring (but) would be beneficial to my futher (去掉for) life ..
1. apply for sth 申请某事；apply to sb 向某人申请
2. pay money for sth 为某事付钱；spend money on sth 花钱在某事上
此次还有另外一种改法：即spend不变,把for改成on
3. bored意思是“感到无聊/厌倦的”,而boring意思是“令人感到无聊/厌倦的”
形容work当然用boring
4. work和study并列,用在had to后面,所以都用动词原形
5. work as...意思是“任...职”,而work for...意思是“为...工作/效力”
6. the fact后面是一个以that引导的同位语从句,此时that不能省略
7. table是可数名词,用在句子当其前没有任何修饰词时,必须用复数形式
8. need to do sth 需要做某事（needed说明need是行为动词,其后不能直接加动词原形）
9. 前后句意之间明显为转折,所以用but
10. further为形容词,直接修饰名词life,中间无需加of
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