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Bob was very fond of the music when he was a child.He spent a lot of time practise the piano every day.Before long he made greatly progress.He begged his parents borrow a piano so that he could practise more and more.Later,he pershade them to send him to Paris which he studied for five years and joined a group of musician.He earned very little money that he didn't have to pay tax.He liked to help young people who get into trouble,because he himself was often out of work.
共有十处错误~拜托大家了!
Bob was very fond of the music when he was a child.He spent a lot of time practise the piano every day.Before long he made greatly progress.He begged his parents borrow a piano so that he could practise more and more.Later,he pershade them to send him to Paris which he studied for five years and joined a group of musician.He earned very little money that he didn't have to pay tax.He liked to help young people who get into trouble,because he himself was often out of work.
共有十处错误~拜托大家了!
1.第一句话没有 (the music)没有the.
2.第二句 practising
3.greatly-->great
4.borrow前面加to
5.which-->where
6.tax-->taxes.
2.第二句 practising
3.greatly-->great
4.borrow前面加to
5.which-->where
6.tax-->taxes.