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写一篇保护动物报告（动物们面临的问题，怎样保护动物…… 我们能做些什么?) 请您帮我写一篇例文，然后点评一下 我的文章。 Everyone should protect the animals because they are our friends.But many people still kill animals for their meat or use their skins for clothes.And many people destory their homes.So they have no place to live in .Now we have to visit them in one small zoo.Then they become stupid.Maybe we should think about can we do?Is it right?The animals need to live in peace.We also need to protect them better.Please remember "没有买卖就没有杀戮”！
解题思路：
解题过程：
The animals need to live in peace可改为We should live in peace with the animals.
Please remember "没有买卖就没有杀戮可改为Please remember "When buying stops,there is no killing"
范文：
I think animals are our friends.We should try our best to protect them.But the animals are facing many questions.For example, the mount of them are reducing,and many of them are killed ,and many of them have no place to live in . They have to live in the special areas such as the zoo, the protecting aeas and so on .
To protect them ,we should protect build more protecting areas.And we shouldn't eat their meat ,and we should wear the clothes made of their fur. I think the poeple who kill the animals should be punished. And the government should make many rules to protect them.
祝你学习进步！
最终答案：略
解题过程：
The animals need to live in peace可改为We should live in peace with the animals.
Please remember "没有买卖就没有杀戮可改为Please remember "When buying stops,there is no killing"
范文：
I think animals are our friends.We should try our best to protect them.But the animals are facing many questions.For example, the mount of them are reducing,and many of them are killed ,and many of them have no place to live in . They have to live in the special areas such as the zoo, the protecting aeas and so on .
To protect them ,we should protect build more protecting areas.And we shouldn't eat their meat ,and we should wear the clothes made of their fur. I think the poeple who kill the animals should be punished. And the government should make many rules to protect them.
祝你学习进步！
最终答案：略