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中文:
北京5月13日电 在阿拉伯联合酋长国首都阿布扎比12日举行的拍卖会上,一个只有一位数字的车牌拍出近700万美元的高价,刷新了世界纪录.
5月12日,阿联酋商人塔拉尔680万美元买下只有一个数字的车牌
据阿联酋通讯社报道,这是阿联酋首次举行车牌
拍卖会.在拍卖会上,一个上面只有“5”这个数字的车牌以2520万迪拉姆（约合686万美元）的价格成交.
报道说,买主是一位名叫塔拉勒·扈利的商人.这场拍卖会的所有收入将用于慈善事业.
此前的车牌拍卖价世界纪录是去年7月在英国约克郡创下的.当时,一个“M1”车牌以33．15万英镑（约合66万美元）的价格成交.
英语翻译：In the first auction,the car licence just with a single number "5",was sold at 6.86 million US dollars on 12th of May.The licence’s price is ten times more expensive than the world's record,the price has broken the old record and began the world’s new record .It's the most expensive car lience in the world now.
The owner of the car lience is a businessman named talorer.All the earning of this auction will donate to charities for helping people who have especial need.
The old record was made in the Yorkshire,UK last July.The car lisence with Number."M1" was sold at 6.5 million dollors.
塔拉尔（名字）英文怎么说？
（收入将全数用作慈善用途，帮助有特别需要的人士）怎么翻译？
这样翻译可不可以？
All the earning will donate to charities for helping people who have especial need.
中文:
北京5月13日电 在阿拉伯联合酋长国首都阿布扎比12日举行的拍卖会上,一个只有一位数字的车牌拍出近700万美元的高价,刷新了世界纪录.
5月12日,阿联酋商人塔拉尔680万美元买下只有一个数字的车牌
据阿联酋通讯社报道,这是阿联酋首次举行车牌
拍卖会.在拍卖会上,一个上面只有“5”这个数字的车牌以2520万迪拉姆（约合686万美元）的价格成交.
报道说,买主是一位名叫塔拉勒·扈利的商人.这场拍卖会的所有收入将用于慈善事业.
此前的车牌拍卖价世界纪录是去年7月在英国约克郡创下的.当时,一个“M1”车牌以33．15万英镑（约合66万美元）的价格成交.
英语翻译：In the first auction,the car licence just with a single number "5",was sold at 6.86 million US dollars on 12th of May.The licence’s price is ten times more expensive than the world's record,the price has broken the old record and began the world’s new record .It's the most expensive car lience in the world now.
The owner of the car lience is a businessman named talorer.All the earning of this auction will donate to charities for helping people who have especial need.
The old record was made in the Yorkshire,UK last July.The car lisence with Number."M1" was sold at 6.5 million dollors.
塔拉尔（名字）英文怎么说？
（收入将全数用作慈善用途，帮助有特别需要的人士）怎么翻译？
这样翻译可不可以？
All the earning will donate to charities for helping people who have especial need.
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