14句高中英语,请鉴定是否正确（只指出错的就可以了）谢谢

14句高中英语,请鉴定是否正确（只指出错的就可以了）谢谢
1. We had to 【put up with& a great noise】( 忍受大量的噪音) when the children were at home
2.We are all for your suggestion that 【the meeting should be delay*】( 会议应当延期)
3.You may see 【it will be the reality that i say】我现在说的会成为现实
4.I assure you that it is true, 【i afraid of somebody who think my story is strange】 ( 生怕有人会认为我的故事奇怪)
5.【having written* down our name and address】(记下了我们的姓名和地址)the policeman let us leave.
6.His story is so sad 【which result in our sympathy】(以至于了引起了我们的同情）
7.If they had invested in that stock, 【maybe they are rich now】 （他们现在可能就很富有了）8.As you are entering a new time in your life, you’ll have to 【fit with your new situation】. (适应新环境)
9.When we moved to France, the children 【fitted with the changing】( 适应这个变化) very well.
10.If we get elected, we will be able to 【set our claims in practicing】( 把我们的主张变成行动)
11.It was several minutes 【before we realized what things had happended】( 我们才明白在发生什么事)
12.We are still dealing with problems 【that was caused by the bypast* wrong】（因为过去的错误引起的）
13.In order to deal well with the pressure coming from life, 【you must view youself by other a view】(你必须换一个角度看自己)
14.His heart attack could be 【relate to a car accident at last years】（和去年的车祸有关）

1.noise 不可数,直接 much noise 即可.
3.感觉可不顺畅,有点汉语化.虚拟语气药换成would
4没谓语,I 后加 am
6 so ...that..固定句型,改成that caused our sympathy
7 虚拟语气,要用 would 、could.should,might 加动词原形.改成they
would be much rich now
10 set...into...
12 wrong这个词不太恰当.
13 a 提到other前
14 related with the accident last year
注意语法及小错误.