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Everyone has their own dreams,I am the same.But my dream is not a lawyer,not a doctor,not actors,not even an industry.Perhaps my dream big people will find it ridiculous,but this has been my pursuit!My dream is to want to have a folk life!I want it to become a beautiful painting,it is not only sharp colors,but also the colors are bleak,I do not rule out the painting is part of the black,but I will treasure these bleak colors!Not yet,how about,a colorful painting,if not bleak,add color,how can it more prominent American?Life is like painting,painting the bright red color represents life beautiful happy moments.Painting a bleak color represents life difficult,unpleasant time.You may find a flat with a beautiful road is not very good yet,but I do not think it will.If a person lives flat then what is the point?Life is only a short few decades,I want it to go Finally,Each memory is a solid
Everyone has their own dreams,I am the same.But my dream is not a lawyer,not a doctor,not actors,not even an industry.Perhaps my dream big people will find it ridiculous,but this has been my pursuit!My dream is to want to have a folk life!I want it to become a beautiful painting,it is not only sharp colors,but also the colors are bleak,I do not rule out the painting is part of the black,but I will treasure these bleak colors!Not yet,how about,a colorful painting,if not bleak,add color,how can it more prominent American?Life is like painting,painting the bright red color represents life beautiful happy moments.Painting a bleak color represents life difficult,unpleasant time.You may find a flat with a beautiful road is not very good yet,but I do not think it will.If a person lives flat then what is the point?Life is only a short few decades,I want it to go Finally,Each memory is a solid
Perhaps my dream big people will find it ridiculous,语法有错误,改为perhaps big people will find my dream ridiculous.
My dream is to want to have a folk life 改为Mydream is to have a folk life
but also the colors are bleak改为but also bleak colors
I do not rule out the painting is part of the black语法也有误
下面还有好几处,汉式英语居多
My dream is to want to have a folk life 改为Mydream is to have a folk life
but also the colors are bleak改为but also bleak colors
I do not rule out the painting is part of the black语法也有误
下面还有好几处,汉式英语居多