作业帮麻烦英语高手帮我修改下这句句子!
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麻烦英语高手帮我修改下这句句子!
原文：我们保证一收到你的银行汇票就在7天之内装运,并在装运完毕后通知你运送日期.
我是这么写的：We are pleased to be able to guaratee shipment of the goods within 7 days your order as soon as we will receive your bank draf,and we also will tell you shipping date after shipment of the goods finish.
麻烦高手们看下我这样写对不对,哪里还可以改一下,使句子更好!
原文：我们保证一收到你的银行汇票就在7天之内装运,并在装运完毕后通知你运送日期.
我是这么写的：We are pleased to be able to guaratee shipment of the goods within 7 days your order as soon as we will receive your bank draf,and we also will tell you shipping date after shipment of the goods finish.
麻烦高手们看下我这样写对不对,哪里还可以改一下,使句子更好!
We guaratee shipping within 7 days and informing you of the date when complete the shippment on receiving your bank draf