作业帮我自己瞎写的评价 谁能给我挑挑错
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我自己瞎写的评价 谁能给我挑挑错
I have a ardour to Study and work;
and can often to work overtime and have a rough time,faithful & be good at communicate & response rapidly,pursue unremittingly with new technology.
and have a nicer ability of enlish-speaking,listening,writing,reading.
I have a ardour to Study and work;
and can often to work overtime and have a rough time,faithful & be good at communicate & response rapidly,pursue unremittingly with new technology.
and have a nicer ability of enlish-speaking,listening,writing,reading.
我只找到两个地方不好
1.can often to work,这里你的can是实意动词,后面接to do没错,但这里还是把can当然助动词的好,直接说can work.
2.faithful & be good at communicate & response rapidly,这一串,一般情况下这种并列关系的段落,里面的词性都要一样(在这里你是要表明自己的特长,全部选形容词比较好),faithful是形容词,后面的几个最好也用形容词形式,比如说be good at communicate改成communicative(当然,不一定要这样改,只要改成形容词就行了),
1.can often to work,这里你的can是实意动词,后面接to do没错,但这里还是把can当然助动词的好,直接说can work.
2.faithful & be good at communicate & response rapidly,这一串,一般情况下这种并列关系的段落,里面的词性都要一样(在这里你是要表明自己的特长,全部选形容词比较好),faithful是形容词,后面的几个最好也用形容词形式,比如说be good at communicate改成communicative(当然,不一定要这样改,只要改成形容词就行了),