请大家帮帮我评下我的英语作文.学习

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请大家帮帮我评下我的英语作文.学习
Dear Sir or Madam.
My name is Li Hua,a 17 years old boy.I'm studying the “Summer knowledgeable” in England school,I met some difficult in learning,I need some help.I will appreciate it if you help me.
I am difficult in studying math and words.I don't know how to dead with the math problem and how to remember the words.So many English words were remembered by me,but now I forget it all.I hope the Learning Center can help me deal the study problem.
Every Sunday,I am free,so I hope I can go to the Learning Center for help on Sunday.My E-mail is Lihua@1236.com,the phone number is 123456.I hope I can get the help from the Learning Center,if you help me that I will be v very happ.
Thanks
Li Hua

多用些连词,比如“...in England school,(but) i met.,(so)i need ”这样读起来会顺溜一些
一些语法和语句错误
met——meet,am——have,dead（deal）with也可以用tackle,remember the words——memorize word,So many English words were remembered by me——i recited many words,
forget it——forget them.
hope-——wish
deal 后面加个with
the study problem——these problems
Every Sunday,I am free,——i have my spare time on every Sunday,
so I can go to the Learning Center for help.
if you help me I will be very happy.不要that
thanks——yours sincerely

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