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请老师修改一下我的这片英语作文，该需要删除的和添加的请老师详细说明！ 老师如果能再帮我找一片与这片主题相同的范文就更好了。 M y summer holid I have a good summer holiday . In this holiday , I was very happy . Because I didn't have a lot of homework . When the holiday coming , I was very excited . Fist , I want to have a long sleep . so, I got up very late , in the next day . I felled very comfortable . Then , I want have a trip . And I go to and stay my sister home some times . when the new term will coming . my father asked me to prepare lessons before class . this is my summer holiday .
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My Summer Vacation
Last summer I spent a two-week vacation at my aunt's place. My aunt lived alone in a mountain village.
One morning I went fishing in the river, where two women washed clothes. I found a most favorable point. Casting out my line I waited anxiously for a bite. Suddenly there came a cry: "Help! Help!" I looked in the direction of the call and saw a boy falling into the river. Throwing the fishing pole, I dashed over like an arrow, jumped into the river and swam very quickly towards the boy. Then together with his mother I carried the boy on my back to a nearby hospital. That boy was saved. The mother gave me a thousand thanks.
Back to my fishing place, I found my fishing pole floating on the water. I managed to get it. But to my great surprise, there was a big fish on the hook.
最终答案：略
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My Summer Vacation
Last summer I spent a two-week vacation at my aunt's place. My aunt lived alone in a mountain village.
One morning I went fishing in the river, where two women washed clothes. I found a most favorable point. Casting out my line I waited anxiously for a bite. Suddenly there came a cry: "Help! Help!" I looked in the direction of the call and saw a boy falling into the river. Throwing the fishing pole, I dashed over like an arrow, jumped into the river and swam very quickly towards the boy. Then together with his mother I carried the boy on my back to a nearby hospital. That boy was saved. The mother gave me a thousand thanks.
Back to my fishing place, I found my fishing pole floating on the water. I managed to get it. But to my great surprise, there was a big fish on the hook.
最终答案：略