作业帮批改作文(请假条)
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请老师把我不足的地方用红笔改出来，批改的文章要适于我，让我明白 Ask for Leave dear teacher: My name is Lin Tao. My mother has a bad cold. My father isn’t at home. I need look after her. I want three day’s leave. When my mother gets healthy .I come back from hospital quick. After come back from hospital. I can study hard get a good grade. Date: September,18. I can study hard. Your student: Lin Tao September,18
解题思路： 首先指出的是你的请假条的格式不正确。个别地方词语使用不当，具体请看修改部分。
解题过程：
修改如下： Ask for leave
To: Teacher
From: Lin Tao
Date: September,18
Subject: Casual Leave of Absence
Dear teacher:
My name is Lin Tao. My mother has a bad cold. My father isn’t at home. I have to look after her. So I want three days ' leave from today on . When my mother gets healthy ,I will come back from hospital quickly. After coming back from hospital. I can study hard to get a good grade.
Thank you , I'm looking forward to your kind answer.
相关知识链接：
英语请假条的写法：
一、一般格式：
To：某某（假条是递给谁的）
From：某某（请假人）
Date：某年某月某日（写假条的日期而不是请假的日期)
Subject：标题（写上请假字样）
例如：
To: Peter Stone,
From: Lynn Chen, Financial Department
Date: April 2nd, 2006
Subject: Casual Leave of Absence
二、参考例文
To: James Zhao, Manager
From: Kaven Han, assistant
Date: March 27th, 2006
Subject: note for sick leave
Dear Mr. James Zhao,
I would like to know if I could ask for a sick leave for one day on March 29th.
I just caught a cold, then I hope I can go to hospital that day. And I will try my best to finish my work on March 28th.
Many thanks. I'm looking forward to your kind answer.
最终答案：略
解题过程：
修改如下： Ask for leave
To: Teacher
From: Lin Tao
Date: September,18
Subject: Casual Leave of Absence
Dear teacher:
My name is Lin Tao. My mother has a bad cold. My father isn’t at home. I have to look after her. So I want three days ' leave from today on . When my mother gets healthy ,I will come back from hospital quickly. After coming back from hospital. I can study hard to get a good grade.
Thank you , I'm looking forward to your kind answer.
相关知识链接：
英语请假条的写法：
一、一般格式：
To：某某（假条是递给谁的）
From：某某（请假人）
Date：某年某月某日（写假条的日期而不是请假的日期)
Subject：标题（写上请假字样）
例如：
To: Peter Stone,
From: Lynn Chen, Financial Department
Date: April 2nd, 2006
Subject: Casual Leave of Absence
二、参考例文
To: James Zhao, Manager
From: Kaven Han, assistant
Date: March 27th, 2006
Subject: note for sick leave
Dear Mr. James Zhao,
I would like to know if I could ask for a sick leave for one day on March 29th.
I just caught a cold, then I hope I can go to hospital that day. And I will try my best to finish my work on March 28th.
Many thanks. I'm looking forward to your kind answer.
最终答案：略