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请英文厉害的人帮我检查我自己写的英文文章里的文法和句型,
If you could change your life,what would you want to do?And if you could achieve this goal,how would your life change?
I wouldn't want to go back into the past (mainly because I wouldn't want to relive that again) but I could change anything I would be my lack of confidence. I didn't have any confidence in myself. For example,When I read passages or answer questions in class,I am so nervous that I can't say a full sentence.After class,I speak fluently,but whenever teachers call me,I feel afraid.  The reason why I failed was that I lacked confidence.So I think that's what I would change.I want to be full of confidence any time.My life would be perfect if I had full of confidence.I think,maybe I can go to a great college.There can be no achievement without diligence and self-confidence.Of course,I like Soochow University now.
elive that again 重复了,可以live that again 或 relive that;
but I could change anything I would be my lack of confidence 这句我认为应该改为:but if I could change anything that would be my my lack of confidence.
The reason why I failed was that I lacked confidence 这句应该保持现在时态吧
其他的我觉得没问题,写得其实还不错.