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英语改错During the weekend I travelled by the air for the first

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During the weekend I travelled by the air for the first time in my life.I usual travel by train or bus.It's both cheaper and safe.But to fly in the sky was something new to me.At the end I felt a little nervous.But very soon I became exciting when I found me high up in the sky among the clouds.I also found that mountains,fields,river and so on were interestingly small.I enjoy the frightening and comfortable journey very much.After all,it is more interesting take a plane than to take a car
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During the weekend I travelled by the(去掉the) air for the first time in my life.I usual改为副词形式(usually) travel by train or bus.It's(They're) both cheaper(cheap,没必要用比较级,both,and连接的词前后形式一致,都用原级就行) and safe.But to fly in the sky was(is这是客观事实,用一般现在时) something new to me.At the end(begining) I felt a little nervous.But very soon I became excitin(exited表示人的一种状态,exicting修饰物) when I found me(myself自反代词) high up in the sky among the clouds.I also found that mountains,fields,river(rivers) and so on were interestingly small.I enjoy the frightening and comfortable journey very much.After all,it is more interesting(加to) take a plane than to take a ca