英语小小作文挑错~The NIRVANAI dont't know why so many people like th
来源:学生作业帮 编辑:作业帮 分类:英语作业 时间:2024/05/13 08:15:47
英语小小作文挑错~
The NIRVANA
I dont't know why so many people like them very.Or maybe i just can't enjoy their music...
One of my friend told me that he love this band very much.Then I seach sth about them and I found many people love their music!So I want to know why.I listened some songs of them tonight.I try to find some songs I like!But I couldn't .To be honest,I don't like that kind of music very much.They're not sounds bad but I just don't like.Maybe I'm opinionated because I just heard a few songs of them.Maybe I'm not have a right of comment because I nearly don't understand music.I'll listen more music of them and then maybe I'll like their music because of knowing them.
Do not make a comment too fast before you know it,I think.
这里面应该有很多语法错误才对> <
如果可以的话希望能有一些写作建议,比如其他的表达法等等
The NIRVANA
I dont't know why so many people like them very.Or maybe i just can't enjoy their music...
One of my friend told me that he love this band very much.Then I seach sth about them and I found many people love their music!So I want to know why.I listened some songs of them tonight.I try to find some songs I like!But I couldn't .To be honest,I don't like that kind of music very much.They're not sounds bad but I just don't like.Maybe I'm opinionated because I just heard a few songs of them.Maybe I'm not have a right of comment because I nearly don't understand music.I'll listen more music of them and then maybe I'll like their music because of knowing them.
Do not make a comment too fast before you know it,I think.
这里面应该有很多语法错误才对> <
如果可以的话希望能有一些写作建议,比如其他的表达法等等
I dont't know why so many people like them very.
首先don't写错了,very也不能放在句尾,应该去掉
Or maybe i just can't enjoy their music...
I大写,其他没错,但觉得不太通顺,如果你想说"或许我只是不懂得欣赏他们的音乐",你可以说maybe I don't know how to appreciate their music 更好一些
One of my friend told me that he love this band very much.
应该是one of my friends,told为过去式,后面时态一致应为loved
Then I seach sth about them and I found many people love their music!
搜索是search 不是seach,整句话时态都不清楚,前面search是一般现在时,后面found是过去式,再后面love又为现在时,应统一.
So I want to know why.
这句对了
I listened some songs of them tonight.
应该是listened to
I try to find some songs I like!
应该是tried
But I couldn't .To be honest,I don't like that kind of music very much.
To be honest?你是不是想说"说句实话",那应该表达为 In fact,后面用very much不妥,最好说I don't like that kind of music at all,我一点也不喜欢那种音乐.
They're not sounds bad but I just don't like.
这里错了,应该是they don't sound bad,而不应该用被动
Maybe I'm opinionated because I just heard a few songs of them.
也许我自以为是因为我只听了一点,heard应该改成listened to,一点点应该是few而不是a few.
Maybe I'm not have a right of comment because I nearly don't understand music.
应该是I don't have a right comment,后面对了
I'll listen more music of them and then maybe I'll like their music because of knowing them.
listen后面加to,后面没有语法错误
Do not make a comment too fast before you know it,I think.
没错
我觉得你的英语表达能力应该注意训练啊,虽然有些看起来是对的,但是读起来很不通顺,应该避免写成中国式英语,希望你继续努力.
首先don't写错了,very也不能放在句尾,应该去掉
Or maybe i just can't enjoy their music...
I大写,其他没错,但觉得不太通顺,如果你想说"或许我只是不懂得欣赏他们的音乐",你可以说maybe I don't know how to appreciate their music 更好一些
One of my friend told me that he love this band very much.
应该是one of my friends,told为过去式,后面时态一致应为loved
Then I seach sth about them and I found many people love their music!
搜索是search 不是seach,整句话时态都不清楚,前面search是一般现在时,后面found是过去式,再后面love又为现在时,应统一.
So I want to know why.
这句对了
I listened some songs of them tonight.
应该是listened to
I try to find some songs I like!
应该是tried
But I couldn't .To be honest,I don't like that kind of music very much.
To be honest?你是不是想说"说句实话",那应该表达为 In fact,后面用very much不妥,最好说I don't like that kind of music at all,我一点也不喜欢那种音乐.
They're not sounds bad but I just don't like.
这里错了,应该是they don't sound bad,而不应该用被动
Maybe I'm opinionated because I just heard a few songs of them.
也许我自以为是因为我只听了一点,heard应该改成listened to,一点点应该是few而不是a few.
Maybe I'm not have a right of comment because I nearly don't understand music.
应该是I don't have a right comment,后面对了
I'll listen more music of them and then maybe I'll like their music because of knowing them.
listen后面加to,后面没有语法错误
Do not make a comment too fast before you know it,I think.
没错
我觉得你的英语表达能力应该注意训练啊,虽然有些看起来是对的,但是读起来很不通顺,应该避免写成中国式英语,希望你继续努力.
英语小小作文挑错~The NIRVANAI dont't know why so many people like th
why there are so many people like surfing the Internet?
Why,so many people like fall in love?
baby i dont know why i so like u这句话什么意思?
几道英语填空题,1.The r_____ why so many people caught the disease i
The reason why so many people are not quiet psychologically
I don't know many people who like horror
英语句子改错:I didn't know why you were so busy in the last there
英语小作文挑错We all know,China is one of the biggest countries in
why dont‘t many passengers choose the bullet trains in china
for many years,people don't know why they don't want to chan
英语作文 3.Stress is the reason why many people stay off working