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求教商务英语letter improving
Dear Sirs
In response to your letter of October 15 enquiring for bedsheets,enclosed please find a sample book and a price list asked for in your above letter.We are confident that these will give you all your reuired details.
Please be informed that our payment terms are by L/C at sight.To ensure punctual shipment of the goods to be orded,you are requested to open the L/C 30 days prior to the stipulated time of shipment.
Our all cotton bed-sheets are popular in the world market,and there is a heavy demand form buyers in your neighboring districts,we are finding it difficult to meet.Your order is being expected,and if it exceeds 100 pieces in which we will allow a special discount of 20%.
Yours sincerely
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Dear Sirs
In response to your letter of October 15 enquiring for bedsheets,here I enclosed the sample book and the price list of the products you asked for in your last email.We are confident that you will find all the informations that you required.
Please be informed that our payment term is by L/C at sight.To ensure the punctual shipment of the goods that you ordered,you are requested to open the L/C 30 days prior to the stipulated time of shipment.
All of our cotton bed-sheets are popular in the world market,and there is a heavy demand from buyers in your neighboring districts,but we find it difficult to meet.Your order is highly being expected,and if the quantity exceeds 100 pieces in which we will offer you a special discount of 20% off.
Yours sincerely