TOEFL作文~写不下去了,帮忙补到300词~已经250+了.最后来一个结尾,我刚开始,不专业~

TOEFL作文~写不下去了,帮忙补到300词~已经250+了.最后来一个结尾,我刚开始,不专业~
Question:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Playing computer games is a waste of time.Children should not be allowed to play them.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays,most children like playing computer games.Some people said that children should not be allowed to play computer games.In my opinion,it shouldn't be allowed.
Although,playing computer games will polish their life and it can relax them.Being students,they maybe have a majority of homework and heavy pressure of learning.Playing games will change their nervous spirits.But there are a number of issues about the disadvantages of playing computer games.
Above all,playing computer games waste lots of time.Some children are addicted to playing computer games.It indeed wastes lots of time of students.A statistics said that one million students are addicted to play computer games and every one wastes about four hours per day.It is a horrible thing that we should pay more attention to.There have a report saying a child,who is addicted to playing computer games,play a half month computer games in an Internet Bar.As a result,their grades are decline down.When they become aware of it,it was too late.The grades can’t be returned.You can see that playing computer games isn’t just wasting a multitude of time.It also waste students’ youths and makes them becoming failing persons.
Furthermore,playing too much computer games will harm to their bodies.Medicine has proved that watching computer’s screen long time will make their eyes tired,and decline their eyesight,especially adolescents.As you can see,there are one third even more students wearing glasses in the classes.It does make a lot of social problems.
说错了,老师让我至少400~帮个忙,把最后那段补完,然后再来个结尾 他为了连我能力~但我实在想不出来怎么写啦~只给我点思路也可以啊~

别人帮你补充到400字了,又有什么用呢?你是花钱找老师学习的,这是你自己的作业,是给你自己练习的.
另外,无论写什么题目都要好好思考一下,这个题目如果把结论说的太绝对了是否有利于你展开思路.现在你的情况就是思路无法充分展开下去了,你只是在说玩电脑游戏完全有害,完全对学生不利,却没有想想是否电脑游戏也有它有益的一面.如果能往对立面想想的话,也许话题就可以展开的更充分,有更多字数可写,这叫做批判性思考.