作业帮请问这篇35分的英语作文能得多少分?
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请问这篇35分的英语作文能得多少分?
最近,某中学生英文报开设了―After-class Activities‖的栏目,请你根据以下提示,为该栏目写一篇英文稿件,并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动.
你校开展课外活动的情况；
2.你参加过的课外活动及给你带来的益处
3.为同学选择课外活动提出建议
4.为学校开展课外活动提出建议
注意：
词数100左右；
2.文中不得提及人名、校名及地名‗
3. 稿件的开头以为你写好（不计入总词数）
After-class Activities Nowadays,after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools.
【接下：：】
and the activities is having a good progression at present,the teacher are focusing all their attention on setting these activities.
the reason why i want to encourage everybody to join the activities is that it is just the after-class activities that i got some society experience from,so i think it is necessary that students join the activities,and i still think you should choose the activities that you like,and try self best to learn some society experience from the activities.
next,my suggestion for school is that teachers should regard whether every student have learned some experience well.
it is high time for everybody （should）join the activities!
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最近,某中学生英文报开设了―After-class Activities‖的栏目,请你根据以下提示,为该栏目写一篇英文稿件,并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动.
你校开展课外活动的情况；
2.你参加过的课外活动及给你带来的益处
3.为同学选择课外活动提出建议
4.为学校开展课外活动提出建议
注意：
词数100左右；
2.文中不得提及人名、校名及地名‗
3. 稿件的开头以为你写好（不计入总词数）
After-class Activities Nowadays,after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools.
【接下：：】
and the activities is having a good progression at present,the teacher are focusing all their attention on setting these activities.
the reason why i want to encourage everybody to join the activities is that it is just the after-class activities that i got some society experience from,so i think it is necessary that students join the activities,and i still think you should choose the activities that you like,and try self best to learn some society experience from the activities.
next,my suggestion for school is that teachers should regard whether every student have learned some experience well.
it is high time for everybody （should）join the activities!
共111词
要是我打分,最多给20分,只能说个及格线上的分.单词大小写不注意,标点符号不注意,语句毫无美感,语气看着不爽.
再问： 请问您英语水平怎么样？谢谢
再答： 还好吧，大二上过六级，我不是英语专业，现在从事的工作跟老外交流~
再问： 请问您英语水平怎么样？谢谢
再答： 还好吧，大二上过六级，我不是英语专业，现在从事的工作跟老外交流~