作业帮英语作文订正,求大神,不要改变句型啊...
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英语作文订正,求大神,不要改变句型啊...
i like animals very much . such cat ,dog monkey.but snake is my best.so on sunday.i ask my father that i want feed a snake ,but he don't agree with me . he think the snake is dangers animal,i tell he that most snake very safely.in the end ,he said:"if you get a good grade in the next monthly examination,I'll buy a snake for you" I'm very surprise,but i feel stress,too.
the day ,i ask friend the new,she feeling very strange.because she think most girl are afraid with snakes. anyway,I'll study hard ,because i want get the snake.
i like animals very much . such cat ,dog monkey.but snake is my best.so on sunday.i ask my father that i want feed a snake ,but he don't agree with me . he think the snake is dangers animal,i tell he that most snake very safely.in the end ,he said:"if you get a good grade in the next monthly examination,I'll buy a snake for you" I'm very surprise,but i feel stress,too.
the day ,i ask friend the new,she feeling very strange.because she think most girl are afraid with snakes. anyway,I'll study hard ,because i want get the snake.
I like animals very much,such as cat,dog,money,but snake is my favorite.Therefore,i ask my father that i would like to feed a snake as my pet,which meets with his strong opposition.He argues that a snake is a dangerous animal so that it may hurt you .I don t think so because most of the snakes are friends to human and act safely Well,under the persistent perusation for my father,he ends up with agreeing with my idea whereas sets a strict condition for that,that is ,he doesn t buy one for me until i get a high mark in the next month's examination.On hearing his words ,suprise and stress are meanwhile pouring into my throat,Yes ,i need to study hard in order to fulfill my dream.
The next day when i meet with one of my good friends ,she cant help but feel like being strange after having heard what i said with my father,in her point of view,the large part of girls actually are afraid of such frieghtening animals like snakes .Maybe i am an expection,i think,well ,i do put all my efforts to study for the purpose of my lovely little snake.
全部进行了大改,
The next day when i meet with one of my good friends ,she cant help but feel like being strange after having heard what i said with my father,in her point of view,the large part of girls actually are afraid of such frieghtening animals like snakes .Maybe i am an expection,i think,well ,i do put all my efforts to study for the purpose of my lovely little snake.
全部进行了大改,