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请大家帮我改错Dear JimmyI have not receive your message for a long

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请大家帮我改错
Dear Jimmy
I have not receive your message for a long time.How are you?How do you like the college lift?
Last month,I made a big decision.I made up me mind to go and studied abroad.So,I spend two hours learn English every day and I take a self-study examination.Because it will get college diploma.The time is passing!So I will need to study hard to make my dream come true.The same to you.We have the same dream now.I believe “knowledge is power”.The world is unfair,we must accept it.I will write to you once a month.I have to stop now.bye!
Your best friend
Howard Lee
一封写给我朋友的信 请帮忙改一下错误的地方 我的英语水平不太好
eceive改成received
lift改成life
me改成my
studied改成study
I take a self-study examination改成I'm going to take the self-study examination
it will get college diploma改成it will get me a college diploma
The time is passing改成Time and tide wait for no one.

we must accept it前面加but
(基本上还写得不错;有些地方应该是粗心所致,例如life写成lift,并非你本身的水平问题)