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求一篇 英语写信的作文,最好多写几篇, 英语考试需要..秋实老师 求你了蛤
解题思路: 书信是最常见的应用文,书写书信一要注意格式;二要注意正文书写。
解题过程:
书信
假如你叫Liu Ning,是个中学生,经常收听音乐节目,请你用英语给节目主持人写一封信,信的要点如下:
你很喜欢这个节目,特别(especially)是英语歌曲。
学习很忙,疲劳时会打开收音机听这个节目。
从英语歌曲中你学会了很多单词。
在听有的歌曲中,你最喜欢“乡音小路”这首美国歌曲。
(词数60---80,注意信的书写格式)
【思路分析】既然是书信,首先要搞清楚谁写信(Li Ming),写给谁(节目主持人),然后是信的内容(按要点进行)。除书信格式,要留意时态变化。
【参考范文】
Dear Sir,
I am a middle school student. I often listen to your music programme. I like it very much, especially the English songs.
As a student, I am busy with my studies. When I feel tires, I will turn on the radio and listen to your programme. I have also learnt many English words from these songs.
Of all the English songs, I like “The Country Road” best.
Love,
Liu Ning
【要点点拨】书信是最常见的应用文,书写书信一要注意格式;二要注意正文书写。
信封格式:左上角写寄信人姓名、地址(门牌号、街道名/村、乡镇;县、市、区、省及邮编;国名),正面中稍偏右处写收信人姓名及地址。
信头及信内地址:一般指收信人和写信人,自上而下右上角是写信人地址和写信日期,隔一行的靠左顶格是收信人地址,一般可省略。
称呼语:比收信人地址低一行,顶格书写,最常用的是dear, 如Dear Mum, Dear Sir,当然我们还可以用Mr, Mrs, Miss, Dr, Prof加姓称呼。
正文:一般信件与汉语一样每段可留有一定空格,而商业信件、公函等则多采用每段都顶格形式,只是段与段之间空一行。正文的内容通常依写信目的而定,可以包括诸多方面,语言要求符合书信特点,更要注意读、写、双方的“身份”,即准确得体,行文应流畅。
结束语及签名:在信快完成时,常写一些祝愿的话,签名时多用Yours, Yours sincerely, Love,下面加自己姓名。
【演练大厅】
Peilong在美国学习,几天前生病了,得到Mrs White的照顾,请写一封信给妈妈,告诉她你的近况,并询问爸爸在英国情况。写信地址已给,日期是:2003年6月18日。字数90左右。
【思路分析】这是一封家书,自然关系亲密无间,因远在他乡加之生病十分想念家乡,信的主体自然围绕生病,看病展开。要求中提到爸爸,信中就应提及。
【参考范文】
Dear Mum,
How are you ? I miss very much.
I fell ill several days ago. I had a bad cold and had to stay in bed for a few days. Mrs White took me to the doctor. He gave me some medicine and told me to drink plenty of water. Now I’m all right.
Mum, don’t worry about me. I’ll take good care of myself. When will Dad come back from England ? Does he often write to you ?
Please say hello to Aunt Huang. I’m sending her some pictures in this letter.
Love,
Peilomg
例:E-mail
假如你叫李华,在因特网上找到了一个叫David的网友,现在请你根据下列要点给David写一个E-mail,介绍你自己的一些情况。
李华,中学生,家住在上海。
喜欢集邮和运动。
对英语很感兴趣,会唱不少英文歌曲。
班里同学也想找网友,希望得到他的帮助。
想去英国看看。
注意:
下面方框中所给词语可供你选择使用,也可适当增加一些词语,使所写出的短文正确、连贯。
词数:65个左右。
提供的词:live in, collect stamps, do some sports, pen friends, visit one’s country , soon, English songs.
【思路分析】按所提供信息,我们只要要点全,表达清楚,连贯即可。
【参考范文】
David,
How are you ? My name is Li Hua. I’m a middle school student. I’m living in Shanghai now. I like collecting stamps. After school, I often play football or do some sports. What’s more, I like English very much and I can sing a few English songs. By the way, some of my classmates want to have their pen friends, too. Can you help us?
I haven’t been to any foreign countries yet, so I hope I’ll visit your country soon.
Li Hua
【要点点拨】E-mail是信息时代的产物,它比书信更简化,发送、接收更快捷,它省去了收、发人的地址及日期,余下的与书信基本相同。
【演练大厅】
Helen正在中国度暑假,她刚刚收到父母的E-mail,他们询问中国饭菜饮食情况,请马上回复。
【思路分析】回复E—mail,我们要切中要害,抓住要点,既然询问Helen在中国的饮食情况,那就不能描述学习情况,要记住“喧宾夺主”的含义。
【参考范文】
Dear Mum and Dad,
I’ve got your e—mail. You asked me how I like Chinese food. My answer is “It’s just wonderful!” All our friends and relatives in Nanjing have asked me to dinner one after another.
In every home, there was something special. They all smelled nice and they were really delicious. I’ve never had anything so delicious in England. Now I don’t think Mum is cooking real Chinese food.
Here in China, I never feel hungry, and I eat a lot at every meal. I just can’t help taking food with my chopsticks. Everybody says I’m getting fat!
Love,
Helen
最终答案:略