,求翻译和润色,我已经悬赏了,请不要用翻译软件应付,汉语中我已经表明了我要怎样的句子,希望能在明天中午之前给出答复,注意

,求翻译和润色,我已经悬赏了,请不要用翻译软件应付,汉语中我已经表明了我要怎样的句子,希望能在明天中午之前给出答复,注意千万不要有错误,

首句在你表示询问时最好不要用persuade啊. 再答： I'm writing to give my idea of permitting us surfing the internet in the classroom.
再答： In your school 去掉。
再问： 实际上我也不想用，但是首句是给出的
再问： 这个也是给校长写信
再答： For our mental and physical health, the teachers and managers of our school have cut the network connection in the classrooms.
再答： Although I really understand behaviors like this , I'm quite against this extreme way.
再答： 上面应该是Behavior ,不是复数
再答： I want them to think more about our thoughts. （只考虑你自己想法太不合适了…得是大家的才行吧）
再答： To begin with, we often face with some problems that could never be learned from the books.
再答： And once we met them, we can find out the answers on the internet immediately.
再答： 如果想表达详细的，可以加上particular
再答： Besides, the internet is the most efficient way to help me know more about current events which I should pay good attention on as a high school student.
再答： It's an obligation and current events can open my horizon.
再问： 果然，我的学习速度，完全比不上你的翻译速度
再答： In my opinion, every coin has two sides , and the internet has both good and bad effects. To get over with it , we need and should judge it on our own.
再答： 等下，第二句先别要。我换换
再答： 等会啊，我去洗脸刷牙…我们熄灯了
再问： 嗯，我不是太着急，真是麻烦你了，上面那些你翻译的我还没学懂完呢
再问： 那个，能把QQ给我吗
再问： 我在英语方面的问题确实很多
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再答： It's high time for us to develop the ability to tell right from wrong.
再答： We are supposed to face with the tough times and learn something.
再答： I hope that you can trust me and give my thought a shot , and I believe that the result would surprise you a little.
再答： 有什么不懂的地方可以提粗来～如满意请采纳哦～
再问： 嗯，姐姐，你早些休息吧
再问： 我先试试能不能自己消化掉
再答： 哈哈，没关系～我们睡得都不早
再问： 那个，能告诉我QQ吗
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再问： ……………
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