英语语法检查I have a dream,tobe an excellent lawyer.In my understa

英语语法检查
I have a dream,tobe an excellent lawyer.
In my understanding,lawyer is asymbol of justice and sagacity.Because of the lawyer profession is sacred and noble;I think that the lawyers are the embodiment of justice.The lawyer does notonly help good person to justify,but also made evildoers go to jail.Justbecause lawyers have the spirit of helping others,therefore my dream is to bea lawyer.
Except helping others engage in alawsuit,I have another purpose to be a lawyer.We all know that the law isfair,so when I became a lawyer I will teach more of the law knowledge to thechildren,to let them know how big the effect the law does!If law is applyingall over the world,then the world will no longer have any criminals!And willalso make the world have more gloss and charm!What I want to tell everyone’sis the law is the seed to destroy evil,let the world be full of laws,is tolet the world be full of love!There because of this,I want to be a lawyer.
There are the reasons I wanted tobe a lawyer,to be a lawyer is not difficult!Thinking of helping others?Thenbecome a lawyer!Want the world to laugh?Then learn laws now!

1.Title:On the junior high school Fun Learning English 改为 Discussion on English class fun teaching in Junior high school
2.requirement--requirements
3.the urgent need for English class fun teaching,and the core are--the urgent need and the core for English class fun teaching are
4.communication,harmonious --communication and harmonious
5.enjoyable the classroom --enjoyable classroom
6.在Using--using ,optimization 前加and
7."A study of English learning" in order to adapt to the new situation and the needs of development for the 21st century to train more useful talents will adapt to the new development in the discipline of English is especially important,but students and very difficult to learn it,so I am from the local the actual situation,problems and improve a few exploratory suggestions to help students learn English.这段改为：
In order to adapt to the new situation and the needs to train more useful talents for the 21st century ,"A study of English learning"is especially important in the discipline of English.But it's very difficult for students to master it,so,from the local reality/actual situation and the existing problems,I put forward/come up with a few exploratory suggestions to help students learn English well.
8.first后面,stimulate前要加一个and
9.“5”要改为fifth