作业帮请老师改一下
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My name is Li Ming.I'm an out-going boy and my age is 13.I like reading books and playing sports.I want to be a writer ,because it's an interesting and important job.When I be a writer,I can write some better books and have some reader. I enjoy writing,because it's funny,I can talk to my books about the story. This is my dream.How about you?
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My name is Li Ming. I'm an out-going boy and my age is 13 (I’m 13 years old). I like reading books and playing sports. I want to be a writer, because it's an interesting and important job.When I be (become) a writer, I can write some better books and have some reader (readers). I enjoy writing, because it's funny, I can talk to my books about the story.
This is my dream.How about you (yours)? yours=your dream
同学您好，划线的是表达不太好的，括号中是老师修改的。如有疑问请留言。感谢您的配合。
最终答案：略
解题过程：
My name is Li Ming. I'm an out-going boy and my age is 13 (I’m 13 years old). I like reading books and playing sports. I want to be a writer, because it's an interesting and important job.When I be (become) a writer, I can write some better books and have some reader (readers). I enjoy writing, because it's funny, I can talk to my books about the story.
This is my dream.How about you (yours)? yours=your dream
同学您好，划线的是表达不太好的，括号中是老师修改的。如有疑问请留言。感谢您的配合。
最终答案：略