作业帮三句英语自我介绍修改!
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三句英语自我介绍修改!
Dear interviewers, my name is XXX. I come from XX. My Bachelor degree in Engineering Management would be earned in 6.2015 and I hope I can continue my Master’s degree in the same major through the exchange program.
尊敬的面试官,我叫XXX.我来自XX.2015年6月我将获得我工程管理的本科学位,同时我希望我能通过这个交流项目继续在同一研究方向学习我的研究生课程.
拒绝Chinglish!
修改过后的：Dear madem/sir, my name is XXX. I am from Nanjing. My major is XX and I will get the bachelor’s degree in Jun, 2015. After that, I hope I could continue my master’s degree in the same major through the exchange program.
Dear interviewers, my name is XXX. I come from XX. My Bachelor degree in Engineering Management would be earned in 6.2015 and I hope I can continue my Master’s degree in the same major through the exchange program.
尊敬的面试官,我叫XXX.我来自XX.2015年6月我将获得我工程管理的本科学位,同时我希望我能通过这个交流项目继续在同一研究方向学习我的研究生课程.
拒绝Chinglish!
修改过后的：Dear madem/sir, my name is XXX. I am from Nanjing. My major is XX and I will get the bachelor’s degree in Jun, 2015. After that, I hope I could continue my master’s degree in the same major through the exchange program.
1、Dear interviewers太生硬了,直接说hello everyone.
邮件中可以说dear什么什么,但是口语的话还是不要用了.
2、从语法上来讲是came from,你可以说i am from,避免错误.
3、i will get my bachelor degree in engineering management in June, 2015.
4、can改为could更委婉.
5、i am applying for this exchange program to continue my research in the same major, and to get master degree.
再问： 针对2，全部都用 I 开头，会不会有点奇怪？
再答： my name is XX, from XXX.
邮件中可以说dear什么什么,但是口语的话还是不要用了.
2、从语法上来讲是came from,你可以说i am from,避免错误.
3、i will get my bachelor degree in engineering management in June, 2015.
4、can改为could更委婉.
5、i am applying for this exchange program to continue my research in the same major, and to get master degree.
再问： 针对2，全部都用 I 开头，会不会有点奇怪？
再答： my name is XX, from XXX.