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Come to Mr Cool’s Store!We sell pants for only ＄30.Do you like sweaters?We have sweaters in red green and white for only ＄15.We have bags in all colors at ＄2 each.Do you like shorts and hats?
We have beautiful shorts for only ＄6 and yellow hats for only ＄5.
That’s not all.Can you believe it?Come to Mr Cool’s store and have a look!
这是我写的英语作文,有没有语法错误或建议,尽管提!
有建议尽管提，或者有什么好句子也给我说说该用在哪
Come to Mr Cool’s Store!We sell pants for only ＄30.Do you like sweaters?We have sweaters in red green and white for only ＄15.We have bags in all colors at ＄2 each.Do you like shorts and hats?
We have beautiful shorts for only ＄6 and yellow hats for only ＄5.
That’s not all.Can you believe it?Come to Mr Cool’s store and have a look!
这是我写的英语作文,有没有语法错误或建议,尽管提!
有建议尽管提，或者有什么好句子也给我说说该用在哪
Do you like sweaters?可以改成 would you like a new sweater that is of the latest cutting for this winter?(你想不想要在这个冬天有一件最新剪裁的毛衣）听起来不会比较生硬.
" We have sweaters in red green and white for only ＄15." 这句最好把for only ＄15改成and each costs only $15.因为别人会不知道你是在说三件一共那个价钱还是什么.还有We have sweaters in red green 的 red green 中间加顿号.
通常shorts 不会用beautiful 来形容.你可以改成fashionable就是时尚流行的短裤.也可以给其他物品加上如nice,that is suitable to you,the latest design 等形容词,看上去会更生动
" We have sweaters in red green and white for only ＄15." 这句最好把for only ＄15改成and each costs only $15.因为别人会不知道你是在说三件一共那个价钱还是什么.还有We have sweaters in red green 的 red green 中间加顿号.
通常shorts 不会用beautiful 来形容.你可以改成fashionable就是时尚流行的短裤.也可以给其他物品加上如nice,that is suitable to you,the latest design 等形容词,看上去会更生动