请老师对这篇比较中国和日本这两个国家的英语作文进行修改，尤其是请老师帮助将作文每段中描写日本和中国的不同点地方，从原来的

请老师对这篇比较中国和日本这两个国家的英语作文进行修改，尤其是请老师帮助将作文每段中描写日本和中国的不同点地方，从原来的说一点中国的再说一点日本的，改为一段中先都说中国的特点然后再说日本的特点或者先都说日本的特点再说中国的特点。谢谢老师!
Two Different Countries Now, most people dream of tr*eling other countries. In fact, people want to know more about other countries information than before. There are many differences information *ween Beijing, China and Tokyo, Japan. These differences include population, transportation, and education of people. Firstly, the difference in the population *ween China and Japan is great. In China, there are 1.3--1.4 billion people. Therefore, China is the country with the largest population in the world. Although Japan has more than 100 million people, it has much smaller population than China. In particular, the capital city’s population *ween China and Japan is much differences. In Beijing, there are 20 million people. However in Tokyo, there are also more than 13 million people. As you all know, Tokyo's area is much smaller than that of Beijing, but why somebody thinks that Beijing is much more crowded than Tokyo? I think that the main reason is transportation. Secondly, the difference in the transportation *ween Beijing China and Tokyo Japan is remarkably obvious. Most of people think that the transportation *ween Beijing and Tokyo is the same. The reason is that both Beijing and Tokyo h*e extremely convenient transportation. Nevertheless, I think that Tokyo's transportation is more convenient that Beijing's. In Tokyo, there are two big airports and one port. On the other hand, Beijing has only one big airport and one small airport. There isn’t any port in Beijing. Thirdly, the difference that is the education *ween Beijing, China and Tokyo, Japan. The most noticeable difference is that in Beijing, most of the schools start on September 1^st. However, in Tokyo, most of the schools start in April. Obviously, they may h*e different dates for holidays. Also, it has an interesting point that, in Beijing, before the holiday, all of the schools h*e an exam. In Tokyo, although all the schools h*e an exam too, it always starts after the holiday. In conclusion, there are three different points *ween Beijing, China and Tokyo, Japan. They are population, transportation and education. For each of point, it is always extremely interesting and unique.
请老师对这篇比较中国和日本这两个国家的英语作文进行修改，尤其是请老师帮助将作文每段中描写日本和中国的不同点地方，从原来的说一点中国的再说一点日本的，改为一段中先都说中国的特点然后再说日本的特点或者先都说日本的特点再说中国的特点。

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解题过程：
Two Different Countries
　　　　Now, more people dream of traveling other countries to know more about other countries than before. There is much different information about population, transportation, and education of people between Beijing, China and Tokyo, Japan,
　　　　Firstly, the difference in the population between China and Japan is great. In China, there are 1.3--1.4 billion people , which makes it a country with the largest population in the world. In Beijing, the capital city of China , there are 20 million people. However, Japan has more than 100 million people, a much smaller population than China. And in the capital city of Japan, Tokyo, there are also more than 13 million people.
　　　　But why somebody thinks that Beijing is much more crowded than Tokyo? I think that the main reason lies in transportation, which is also the second difference. The difference in the transportation between them is remarkably obvious. Although both Beijing and Tokyo have extremely convenient transportation, I think Tokyo's transportation is more convenient than Beijing's. For example , In Tokyo, there are two big airports and one port. On the other hand, Beijing has only one big airport and one small airport and there isn’t any port in Beijing.
　　　　Thirdly, the difference is the education . The most noticeable is that in Beijing, most of the schools start on September 1st, while in Tokyo, most of the schools start in April. Obviously, they may have different dates for holidays. Also, it has an interesting point that, in Beijing, all of the schools have an exam before the holiday, but in Tokyo, all the schools have an exam after the holiday.
　　　　In conclusion, there are many extremely interesting and unique different points between Beijing, China and Tokyo, Japan in population, transportation and education.