作业帮请 英语老师 帮我看看这一段话有没有错误?200分!
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请 英语老师 帮我看看这一段话有没有错误?200分!
请 英语老师 帮我看看这段话有没有错误?200分!
（我是用在考研英语1,图画描述的第一段）
想问问————第一段 大概 这样写行不行,有没有什么错误?（XX 表示要自己填写的东西） It is widely accepted that how to perceive XX is a hot topic which is most talked about.As we can see from the vivid picture,the characters in the middle of it are doing something thought-stimulating.In the center of the picture appear many people,standing in the middle of the road and staring at that thing and thinking about their future with a variety of stuff in front of them such as “XX” and so on.And this will enlighten us persistently.
请 英语老师 帮我看看这段话有没有错误?200分!
（我是用在考研英语1,图画描述的第一段）
想问问————第一段 大概 这样写行不行,有没有什么错误?（XX 表示要自己填写的东西） It is widely accepted that how to perceive XX is a hot topic which is most talked about.As we can see from the vivid picture,the characters in the middle of it are doing something thought-stimulating.In the center of the picture appear many people,standing in the middle of the road and staring at that thing and thinking about their future with a variety of stuff in front of them such as “XX” and so on.And this will enlighten us persistently.
It is widely accepted that how to perceive XX is a hot topic which is [most此处应该用副词mostly或frequently或most frequently] talked about. As we can see from the vivid picture, the characters in the middle [of it可以省略] are doing something thought-stimulating. In the center of [the picture改为it], [appear改为there are] many people standing in the middle of the road, [删除and,出现多个并列的意群时,一般只有最后一个前用and,之前的用逗号] staring at that thing and thinking about their future with a variety of stuff in front of them such as [“XX”, xx and so on.and so on前面至少要列出两样东西] And this will enlighten us persistently.
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