作业帮帮我看看这段有语法错误没吧
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帮我看看这段有语法错误没吧
Beijing opera types of facial makeup in operas are based on certain personality,temperament or some special types of figures for the use of certain colors.Red has expressed his Warriors of strong types of facial makeup in operas such as Guan Yu,concubines Victoria,regular book; Black said the types of facial makeup in operas ming criticized people,integrity,bravery and even reckless,such as Zheng and Zhang Fei,Li; Yellow types of facial makeup in operas that vicious brutality,such as Yu Chengdu,and Dian Wei.Blue or green types of facial makeup in operas that some of the figures represented irritable,such as Dou Ambassador,Ma Wu; General treacherous court official said the types of facial makeup in operas white,bad guys,such as Cao Cao,Zhao higher.
或者按这意思给写个更好的?
Beijing opera types of facial makeup in operas are based on certain personality,temperament or some special types of figures for the use of certain colors.Red has expressed his Warriors of strong types of facial makeup in operas such as Guan Yu,concubines Victoria,regular book; Black said the types of facial makeup in operas ming criticized people,integrity,bravery and even reckless,such as Zheng and Zhang Fei,Li; Yellow types of facial makeup in operas that vicious brutality,such as Yu Chengdu,and Dian Wei.Blue or green types of facial makeup in operas that some of the figures represented irritable,such as Dou Ambassador,Ma Wu; General treacherous court official said the types of facial makeup in operas white,bad guys,such as Cao Cao,Zhao higher.
或者按这意思给写个更好的?
第一句就最好改一下
The facial types in Pecking opera plays are based on the certain personality,temperament and some other special type of features which painted in the certain colours.
Do not do that much complex sentences,that is hard to follow indeed.By the way,do not use the same word such as type and makeup,use more synonames.
You can do it better,
Good luck
The facial types in Pecking opera plays are based on the certain personality,temperament and some other special type of features which painted in the certain colours.
Do not do that much complex sentences,that is hard to follow indeed.By the way,do not use the same word such as type and makeup,use more synonames.
You can do it better,
Good luck