请英语好的朋友帮助纠正一下翻译错误：“1. 最近的Bible Study 正好是在学习G.”

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请英语好的朋友帮助纠正一下翻译错误：“1. 最近的Bible Study 正好是在学习G.”
（中文是想要表达的意思,翻译不必和中文完全一样）
中文部分：
1. 最近的Bible Study 正好是在学习Genesis,打算去看诺亚方舟这部电影.虽然在imdb上这部电影都没有到7分；
2. 最近的天气使人容易生病,很多身边的人都感冒了.希望大家都保重身体；
3. 今天申请一份工作,虽然成功的可能性不高,但是至少去尝试了.
我的翻译：
1. I plan to watch a movie name "Noah" even the rank on imdb is under 7, because I just studied book Genesis in Bible Study recently;
2. Some of my friend catch cold those days due to the weather is easily make sick recently, hoping everyone could take care of themselves;
3. Although it was hard to success, but I still applied a job today, because something need trying.

I (plan改为 am planning) to watch a movie name "Noah" even (the应改为 its) rank on imdb is under 7, because I (要加have) just studied book Genesis in Bible Study recently;
Some of my friend (catch 要改为caught 因为已经病倒了) cold (those 应是 these) days due to the weather is easily (make 要改为 making people) (sick 应该用 ill) recently, hoping everyone could take care of themselves;
Although it( was hard 应改为 is unlikely) to success, (要去掉but) I still applied a job today, because something need trying.

注: Although 是: 虽然.但是的意思,所以不用加 but.

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