英语 修改 语法下面这两篇英语不知道有没有语法错误,或者习惯用法错误,请帮忙指正.谢谢! family： I have

英语 修改 语法
下面这两篇英语不知道有没有语法错误,或者习惯用法错误,请帮忙指正.谢谢!

family：
I have a happy family.There are parents,Two Brothers, my sister and I in my family. My parent are both doctor,they are very strict and always educate us when we made mistakes. My father believe that knowledge can change fate. So, my father offer more opportunity for me to study .My brother graduated from university last year , and is working in a Shunde hospital. he is responsible for the younger siblings's tuition expenses.
in the family, we get along with each other very well and I am luck enough because I have a good family.My parents are the people I love the most and appreciate the most in the world.

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hometown：
I come from Jieyang,a beautiful city of Guangdong province ,it is located in the eastern of Guangdong not far from Shantou.It is a middle-sized developing city, it has a population of 6 million .Our city is famous in food.
People in my hometown are very hardworking and open-minded. They can accept new things quickly, furthermore they like do their work in a efficient way. They like enjoy their colorful life.
I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.

family：
i have a happy family which including my parent tow brothers and my little sister and i .both of my parent are doctor.they keep very strict when we do something wrong.My father believes that knowledge can change one's fate.So,my father offers many opportunities for me to study .My brother graduated from university last year ,and now he is working at a Shunde hospital.he is responsible for the younger siblings's tuition expenses.
in my family,we get along with each other very well and I feel so lucky for I have a good family.My parents are the one who I love the most and appreciate the most in the world.
hometown：
I come from Jieyangwhich is a beautiful city of Guangdong province ,it is located in the eastern of Guangdong not far from Shantou.It is a middle-sized developing city,it has a population of 6 million .Our city is famous in food.
People in my hometown are very hardworking and open-minded.They can accept new things quickly,furthermore they like to do their work in a efficient way.They enjoy their colorful life.
I love my hometown.and so do it with its people.They are working hard so as to make my hometown more richer and more beautiful.