作业帮急需解答短文改错;on a summer night,l was sleeping in my bed while l
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急需解答短文改错;on a summer night,l was sleeping in my bed while l was awakened by loud sound.
A hurricane was coming!my parents and l ran downstairs with the scaring dog in my arms.soon l hear the loud noise of my house being thrown this way and that.the door was shaking as if anyone were trying to violently get it open.the hurricanewas lasted about 20 minutes.many things were blown away.some books of my werefound half a mile far,and my broken-up bed was found far away from my house.fortunately,my family and my dog were okay.l will never forget the night which mother Nature showed her destructive powers.并说明为什么这样改
A hurricane was coming!my parents and l ran downstairs with the scaring dog in my arms.soon l hear the loud noise of my house being thrown this way and that.the door was shaking as if anyone were trying to violently get it open.the hurricanewas lasted about 20 minutes.many things were blown away.some books of my werefound half a mile far,and my broken-up bed was found far away from my house.fortunately,my family and my dog were okay.l will never forget the night which mother Nature showed her destructive powers.并说明为什么这样改
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On a summer night,l was sleeping in my bed (while改成when) l was awakened by (加入a) loud sound.A hurricane was coming!My parents and l ran downstairs with the (scaring改成scared) dog in my arms.Soon l (hear改成heard) the loud noise of my house being thrown this way and that.The door was shaking as if (anyone改成someone) were trying to violently get it open.The hurricane (去掉was) lasted about 20 minutes.Many things were blown away.Some books of (my改成mine) were found half a mile (far改成away),and my broken-up bed was found far away from my house.Fortunately,my family and my dog were okay.l will never forget the night (which改成when) mother Nature showed her destructive (powers改成power).
when为并列连词,意思是“就在这时”,while无此用法；
sound为可数名词；
scared dog 感到害怕的狗,scaring dog 令人害怕的狗；
过去时,hear改成heard；
陈述句用someone,不用anyone；
last做动词无被动结构；
前面有具体数量时,不用far,可用away；
of为介词,其后可加名词性物主代词mine,不能单独加形容词性物主代词my；
定语从句缺少时间状语,所以用关系副词when,不能用关系代词which；
power用单数即可,一般不用复数形式.
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On a summer night,l was sleeping in my bed (while改成when) l was awakened by (加入a) loud sound.A hurricane was coming!My parents and l ran downstairs with the (scaring改成scared) dog in my arms.Soon l (hear改成heard) the loud noise of my house being thrown this way and that.The door was shaking as if (anyone改成someone) were trying to violently get it open.The hurricane (去掉was) lasted about 20 minutes.Many things were blown away.Some books of (my改成mine) were found half a mile (far改成away),and my broken-up bed was found far away from my house.Fortunately,my family and my dog were okay.l will never forget the night (which改成when) mother Nature showed her destructive (powers改成power).
when为并列连词,意思是“就在这时”,while无此用法；
sound为可数名词；
scared dog 感到害怕的狗,scaring dog 令人害怕的狗；
过去时,hear改成heard；
陈述句用someone,不用anyone；
last做动词无被动结构；
前面有具体数量时,不用far,可用away；
of为介词,其后可加名词性物主代词mine,不能单独加形容词性物主代词my；
定语从句缺少时间状语,所以用关系副词when,不能用关系代词which；
power用单数即可,一般不用复数形式.
如果你满意我的答案,敬请点击 ,
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