作业帮请帮我修改这篇英语作文,
来源：学生作业帮 编辑：作业帮 分类：综合作业 时间：2024/05/10 08:57:57
请帮我修改这篇英语作文,
Argument cannot be exempted during making friends.Arguing with our friends that we could have many reasons,such as borrowing money to some of our friends but they do not give them back in time,falling in love with a common boy at the same time,dating late,and so on.When we have a argument with our friends,we should calm down,then try to talk about the problems and solve them.Perhaps,solving the problems need to spend over one day,talking them over together is the best way to keep our friendships.
Lily,who was my best friend during my high school life.We often hung out and studied together.
One time,I had a match for playing volleyball on a Monday afternoon at a gymnasium.I had told Lily I wished that she could come to watch the match and pick me up before the play day.However,Lily did not arrive to the gymnasium until the match was done.I got angry extremely and confused why she did not come.The following day,I did not see her in the campus.I called so many times but she did not answer the telephone.I started to consider that she did not care about me and treat me as her friend since the day.We have not been in contact with each other for a week.
One day,I decided to visit her home and ask her what happened.At first,I blamed her why she did not watch my match and I got angry strongly.When she began to cry,I realized I needed to calm down at once.Then we talked for a long time in her room.She told me her grandfather was sent to the hospital suddenly due to his heart attack.She accompanied her grandfather for a week since the doctor had told her family her grandfather was not to be long for this world.Finally,I made senses all of the things.I made an apology to her sincerely.What’s more,I told her we were friends and we can share happiness and sorrow together.
Talking with our friends is the best policy.
如果有些词语太累赘 也请帮忙改掉
Argument cannot be exempted during making friends.Arguing with our friends that we could have many reasons,such as borrowing money to some of our friends but they do not give them back in time,falling in love with a common boy at the same time,dating late,and so on.When we have a argument with our friends,we should calm down,then try to talk about the problems and solve them.Perhaps,solving the problems need to spend over one day,talking them over together is the best way to keep our friendships.
Lily,who was my best friend during my high school life.We often hung out and studied together.
One time,I had a match for playing volleyball on a Monday afternoon at a gymnasium.I had told Lily I wished that she could come to watch the match and pick me up before the play day.However,Lily did not arrive to the gymnasium until the match was done.I got angry extremely and confused why she did not come.The following day,I did not see her in the campus.I called so many times but she did not answer the telephone.I started to consider that she did not care about me and treat me as her friend since the day.We have not been in contact with each other for a week.
One day,I decided to visit her home and ask her what happened.At first,I blamed her why she did not watch my match and I got angry strongly.When she began to cry,I realized I needed to calm down at once.Then we talked for a long time in her room.She told me her grandfather was sent to the hospital suddenly due to his heart attack.She accompanied her grandfather for a week since the doctor had told her family her grandfather was not to be long for this world.Finally,I made senses all of the things.I made an apology to her sincerely.What’s more,I told her we were friends and we can share happiness and sorrow together.
Talking with our friends is the best policy.
如果有些词语太累赘 也请帮忙改掉
Argument cannot be exempted during making friends.We could have many reasons to Argue with friends,such as borrowing money to them but they do not pay back on time,dating late because one is dealing love realtionship with a boy,and so on.When we have an argument with our friends,we should calm down,then try to figure out the problems and solve them.Perhaps solving the problems need to spend over one day,talking them over together is the best way to keep friendship.
For example,Lily,who was my best friend during my high school life,often hung out and studied with me.
One time,I had a match for playing volleyball on a Monday afternoon at a gymnasium.I had told Lily I wished that she could come to watch and pick me up before the play day.However,Lily did not arrive at the gymnasium until the match was done.I was angry and confused why she did not come.On the following day,I did not see her in school.I called her many times but she did not answer the phone.I was thiniking that maybe she did not care about me and treat me as her friend from that day.We had not been in contact with each other for a week.
One day,I decided to visit her and ask her what happened.At first,I blamed her why she did not watch my match and I was very angry.When she began to cry,I realized I needed to calm down.Then we talked for a long time in her room.She told me her grandfather was sent to the hospital due to his heart attack.She accompanied her grandfather for a week since the doctor had told her family that her grandfather was not to be long for this world.Finally,I figured out all of the things.I apologized to her.What’s more,I told her we were still friends and we can share happiness and sorrow.
Therofre,talking to our friends is the best policy.
For example,Lily,who was my best friend during my high school life,often hung out and studied with me.
One time,I had a match for playing volleyball on a Monday afternoon at a gymnasium.I had told Lily I wished that she could come to watch and pick me up before the play day.However,Lily did not arrive at the gymnasium until the match was done.I was angry and confused why she did not come.On the following day,I did not see her in school.I called her many times but she did not answer the phone.I was thiniking that maybe she did not care about me and treat me as her friend from that day.We had not been in contact with each other for a week.
One day,I decided to visit her and ask her what happened.At first,I blamed her why she did not watch my match and I was very angry.When she began to cry,I realized I needed to calm down.Then we talked for a long time in her room.She told me her grandfather was sent to the hospital due to his heart attack.She accompanied her grandfather for a week since the doctor had told her family that her grandfather was not to be long for this world.Finally,I figured out all of the things.I apologized to her.What’s more,I told her we were still friends and we can share happiness and sorrow.
Therofre,talking to our friends is the best policy.