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帮我看看这篇英语自我介绍有没有错误!
good morning every body I am very glad to introduce myself to all of you .
my name is liruixian.I am 16.I come from No.2 Middle scool.it is no doubt that I am happy to be a member of No.1 Middle School.
I am only daughter in my family I like listening to music in my free time.It is true that I dislike reading books .I like green and I like watching anime my favorite is death note .tell you a secret,my birthday is Bachelor's day It is easy to remember,isn't is
that's all thanks for listening!
good morning every body I am very glad to introduce myself to all of you .
my name is liruixian.I am 16.I come from No.2 Middle scool.it is no doubt that I am happy to be a member of No.1 Middle School.
I am only daughter in my family I like listening to music in my free time.It is true that I dislike reading books .I like green and I like watching anime my favorite is death note .tell you a secret,my birthday is Bachelor's day It is easy to remember,isn't is
that's all thanks for listening!
先说拼写,或者打字错误：school animal
然后应该用there is no doubt that
还有,应该用the only daughter,因为独一无二,就你一个.
还有,光棍节能这样说么?总感觉很有chinglish的意思.
最后,anime 意思是 日本低俗动画片?换个词吧,cartoons.
然后应该用there is no doubt that
还有,应该用the only daughter,因为独一无二,就你一个.
还有,光棍节能这样说么?总感觉很有chinglish的意思.
最后,anime 意思是 日本低俗动画片?换个词吧,cartoons.