作业帮看看我英语作文的语法问题（小学六年级）
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看看我英语作文的语法问题（小学六年级）
yesterday
Yesterday,I had a big surprise.there is a big park in Renmin Road,and we went there yesterday.There were lots and lots of people there.There were many beautiful flowers and trees there.The people was sang,danced and played chess there.We had a picnic in the park,the food was Chinese food,they were very delicious.Then we saw Chinese dancing in there.I really liked it.I want learn this dancing.
It's a very prefect day!
yesterday
Yesterday,I had a big surprise.there is a big park in Renmin Road,and we went there yesterday.There were lots and lots of people there.There were many beautiful flowers and trees there.The people was sang,danced and played chess there.We had a picnic in the park,the food was Chinese food,they were very delicious.Then we saw Chinese dancing in there.I really liked it.I want learn this dancing.
It's a very prefect day!
第一句话有些问题,用surprise有些不妥,和后文没有什么关系.你可以写成“I was very happy yesterday”或者“yesterday was a fine day”.“There were lots and lots of people there”这句话有问题应改为There were lots of people there.
"The people was sang,danced and played chess there."People前不加"the"
而且这句话语法有问题,应该改为People sang danced and played chess.“be+doing”是现在进行时不适合用在这里,因为整篇文章用的都是过去时,文章时态要统一
“the food was Chinese food”这个我也不确定对不对,但觉得怪怪的,可以换一种方式来讲“We ate Chinese food.”
“they were very delicious”这句话不对,因为Cinese food是不可数名词,一般看作单数所以应改成“It was very delicious.”
"Then we saw Chinese dancing in there."这句也有问题.“there"是副词,副词前不加定冠词“the”
“ I want learn this dancing”这句时态错了,应该是“wanted”还有应该是“I wanted to learn this dancing”这里有一个动词不定式“want to do something”
“It's a very prefect day!”时态错误!应是“It was a very prefect day!”
上面的都是我自己改的,应该都对,你自己仔细再看一下,有好多东西可能小学还没有教过,所以你错得比较多,不过没有关系的,以后在初中里都会讲的.你一定要再接再厉哦!
"The people was sang,danced and played chess there."People前不加"the"
而且这句话语法有问题,应该改为People sang danced and played chess.“be+doing”是现在进行时不适合用在这里,因为整篇文章用的都是过去时,文章时态要统一
“the food was Chinese food”这个我也不确定对不对,但觉得怪怪的,可以换一种方式来讲“We ate Chinese food.”
“they were very delicious”这句话不对,因为Cinese food是不可数名词,一般看作单数所以应改成“It was very delicious.”
"Then we saw Chinese dancing in there."这句也有问题.“there"是副词,副词前不加定冠词“the”
“ I want learn this dancing”这句时态错了,应该是“wanted”还有应该是“I wanted to learn this dancing”这里有一个动词不定式“want to do something”
“It's a very prefect day!”时态错误!应是“It was a very prefect day!”
上面的都是我自己改的,应该都对,你自己仔细再看一下,有好多东西可能小学还没有教过,所以你错得比较多,不过没有关系的,以后在初中里都会讲的.你一定要再接再厉哦!