英语翻译所以想请你们帮我看一下,有什么语法或者拼写错误.部分原文：Han Hong was born in the ro

英语翻译
所以想请你们帮我看一下,有什么语法或者拼写错误.
部分原文：
Han Hong was born in the roof of the world Tibet the beauty of the lake of river,father's death and the chengdu military area command banner of song and dance crosstalk actors,and my mother is a song "the Beijing golden mountain" on the Tibetan female singer Yong Xi.Han Hong troops have I can't part of feelings,no matter where she is how,identity,in before the great river north and south,she will write their own songs dedicated to the officers and troops.Today,she finally realized Duo Nian desire,become a member of the people's air force,she said she would let his singing career and the development of people's air force closely together,with the most beautiful voice singing our most lovely people.
I like HanHong because I heard her song--at dawn.The song and the story behind it deeply touched me.At the moment of birth and death,parents think of and not themselves,they used both hands to the hope of life to his son,this is the love of parents.Below is "At dawn" this song the story behind.
The story happened in the 1999 years of 3 October,Ma Ling scenic spot,Gui Zhou,the running cable car suddenly crashed,36 passengers,of 14 died.At that time,let only 2-year-old boy ,Pan Zihao became orphan.The cable car to decline of huge that instant,Pan Zihao’s father Hao Pan Tianji and his mother He Yanwen lifted their children.The results,the son Pan Zihao survived,but his parents lost their lives.
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