作业帮有哪位英语高手肯帮忙解答这道短文改错题目?多谢多谢!
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有哪位英语高手肯帮忙解答这道短文改错题目?多谢多谢!
原题如下（错误自然是10处,请准确指出后改正.）
On my opinion,Zhen zidan is a very good action actor.I often felt very excited watching his movies.However,before I watched "The Legend of Chen Zhen" starring him,I felt a little disappointing.It is a very exciting movie,and it is not so good as in this movie.I like his performance in the movie "Ye Wen".Actually I was a little surprised when I was watching the movies.I had never thought he would do such good job.Zhen ZIdan is very popular now,but I do hope he will try to improve her performance instead of star in one movie after another.
还请大家多多帮忙，不要吝惜笔墨呦。 ————万分感激。
原题如下（错误自然是10处,请准确指出后改正.）
On my opinion,Zhen zidan is a very good action actor.I often felt very excited watching his movies.However,before I watched "The Legend of Chen Zhen" starring him,I felt a little disappointing.It is a very exciting movie,and it is not so good as in this movie.I like his performance in the movie "Ye Wen".Actually I was a little surprised when I was watching the movies.I had never thought he would do such good job.Zhen ZIdan is very popular now,but I do hope he will try to improve her performance instead of star in one movie after another.
还请大家多多帮忙，不要吝惜笔墨呦。 ————万分感激。
第一行 on改为in
第二行 before改为after starring him中间加by
第三行 disappointing改为disappointed and改为but it改为he
第四行 movies改为movie
第五行 such good中间加a
第六行her改为in star改为starring
第二行 before改为after starring him中间加by
第三行 disappointing改为disappointed and改为but it改为he
第四行 movies改为movie
第五行 such good中间加a
第六行her改为in star改为starring