作业帮(20140113)一道高中英语书面表达题,
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(20140113)一道高中英语书面表达题,
Heavy smog in china
At the end of 2013,a heavy smog came in cold winter and nearly 25 provinces were covered with the smog so that people’s regular life was disturbed.
The cause of smog is pollution.Many factories produce too much smog but don’t cope with it,putting it out into the air directly.With the bad phenomenon happening again and again,the air becomes darker and darker ,the smog turns to be heavier and heavier.
So the problem that how to protect the environment in a harmonious way is presented to public.In a traditional way,we should ban those factories that make much pollution not to make great smog.Facing with the heavy smog,we should use something that can cover our mouths.Besides,we shouldn’t go outside frequently to breath in less smog or ash.
Aiming at the heavy smog in china,we should protect our environment shoulder to shoulder in purpose of making a cozier world to live in!
Heavy smog in china
At the end of 2013,a heavy smog came in cold winter and nearly 25 provinces were covered with the smog so that people’s regular life was disturbed.
The cause of smog is pollution.Many factories produce too much smog but don’t cope with it,putting it out into the air directly.With the bad phenomenon happening again and again,the air becomes darker and darker ,the smog turns to be heavier and heavier.
So the problem that how to protect the environment in a harmonious way is presented to public.In a traditional way,we should ban those factories that make much pollution not to make great smog.Facing with the heavy smog,we should use something that can cover our mouths.Besides,we shouldn’t go outside frequently to breath in less smog or ash.
Aiming at the heavy smog in china,we should protect our environment shoulder to shoulder in purpose of making a cozier world to live in!
Para1 还可以.
Para2 可以在此基础上再列举多一个原因,让说理更充分.There are two main factors responsible for this phenmomenon.On the one hand,Many industry factories produce too much smog but don’t cope with it,putting it out into the air directly.On the other hand,increasingly more private cars are to be used,resulting to serious waste gas emission.
Para 3 +Ralavant laws should be put forward by the government to control the smog pullution.改：Those factories that produce strong smog should be punished or shut dowm so that they can be confined to a small ammount .……Besides 后的句子怪怪的,可将后两句改成：We have batter stay indoors frequently and keep away from the smog and ash.We can use mouth-muffles or scarfs to cover our mouths if we have to go outside .
Para 4 感觉 aim at 和 in the purpose of 重复了.
Para2 可以在此基础上再列举多一个原因,让说理更充分.There are two main factors responsible for this phenmomenon.On the one hand,Many industry factories produce too much smog but don’t cope with it,putting it out into the air directly.On the other hand,increasingly more private cars are to be used,resulting to serious waste gas emission.
Para 3 +Ralavant laws should be put forward by the government to control the smog pullution.改：Those factories that produce strong smog should be punished or shut dowm so that they can be confined to a small ammount .……Besides 后的句子怪怪的,可将后两句改成：We have batter stay indoors frequently and keep away from the smog and ash.We can use mouth-muffles or scarfs to cover our mouths if we have to go outside .
Para 4 感觉 aim at 和 in the purpose of 重复了.