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看看这篇英语作文有什么错误,请改出来,（是过去式）
My vacation
My vacation was great.I with my family went toa beautiful beah.There were many people here.On vacation,most of the weather was sunny and hot.In the morning.We
had great fun playing in the water.And for lunch,we had a delicious seafood at a resaurant.In the afternoon.We went swimming and played beach volleyball.It was really
fun.In the evening,we watched talk shows on TV at hotel.I really enjoyed myself very
much.

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My vacation
My vacation was great.I as well as my family went to a beautiful beach.There were already many people on vacation there ,most of the time the weather was sunny and hot.In the morning.we had great fun playing in the water.And for lunch,we had delicious seafood at a resaurant not far from the beach.In the afternoon,we went swimming and played beach volleyball.It was really great fun.In the evening,we watched talk shows on TV at the hotel.I really enjoyed myself very much.

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