帮忙看下小弟的英语作文,不足之处请指出,
来源:学生作业帮 编辑:作业帮 分类:英语作业 时间:2024/05/22 11:57:58
帮忙看下小弟的英语作文,不足之处请指出,
I don't know what I want ,or what is my life target,and I don't know I was what kind
of man .
I always think ,maybe almost people ask themselves,what I want ,what I need ,
and then ,what I gonna do,perhaps just enjoy this process.
Some people need friend ,or money ,power,sex etc.The key is do you have a
dream,its noble or vulgar.What ever,it belongs to you.
What are you suppose to do,to get more and faster what you want,of course,
under your principle.Don't care about what others think of you.
ugly,fat,false loftiness,selfish,arrogance,hypocrisy,all the bad words to describe
you.Remember this,different people think you are not the same.
Remeber your dream ,then to make it come ture.The key is to enjoy this process.
中文意思大概就是,我不知道我想要什么,或者我的生活目标是什么,又或者我到底是个什么人.
我一直这样想,大多数人会问自己,我想要什么,得到之后又怎样,可能只是在享受这个过程.
一些人需要朋友,一些人需要钱,权利,美色等等,重要的是有没有梦想,是高尚或者低俗,无论怎样,那是属于你的.
你该怎样去做才能更多更快的得到你想要的,当然,在你的原则允许以内,不用在乎别人怎么看待你.
丑陋,肥胖,假清高,自私,自大,虚伪,所有的不好的词语来形容你,记住这个,不同的人眼中有不同的你,
记住你的梦想,然后实现它,关键是去享受这个过程
I don't know what I want ,or what is my life target,and I don't know I was what kind
of man .
I always think ,maybe almost people ask themselves,what I want ,what I need ,
and then ,what I gonna do,perhaps just enjoy this process.
Some people need friend ,or money ,power,sex etc.The key is do you have a
dream,its noble or vulgar.What ever,it belongs to you.
What are you suppose to do,to get more and faster what you want,of course,
under your principle.Don't care about what others think of you.
ugly,fat,false loftiness,selfish,arrogance,hypocrisy,all the bad words to describe
you.Remember this,different people think you are not the same.
Remeber your dream ,then to make it come ture.The key is to enjoy this process.
中文意思大概就是,我不知道我想要什么,或者我的生活目标是什么,又或者我到底是个什么人.
我一直这样想,大多数人会问自己,我想要什么,得到之后又怎样,可能只是在享受这个过程.
一些人需要朋友,一些人需要钱,权利,美色等等,重要的是有没有梦想,是高尚或者低俗,无论怎样,那是属于你的.
你该怎样去做才能更多更快的得到你想要的,当然,在你的原则允许以内,不用在乎别人怎么看待你.
丑陋,肥胖,假清高,自私,自大,虚伪,所有的不好的词语来形容你,记住这个,不同的人眼中有不同的你,
记住你的梦想,然后实现它,关键是去享受这个过程
有几处用词不当、语法标点小错误.已改正.
I don't know what I want ,or what is my life target.And I don't know what kind of person I am .
I think many people maybe ask themselves that “what I want”,“what do I need”.And then ,what I want to do perhaps just enjoy this process.
Some people need friend ,money ,power ,sex etc.The key is whether you ever had a dream.Its noble or vulgar.Whatever,it belongs to you.
What are you suppose to do to get what you want more and to be faster.Of course,it's depends on your principle.Don't care about what others thinking about you——ugly,fat,false loftiness,selfish,arrogance,hypocrisy,all the bad words to describe
you.Remember that the others think you are unique.
Remeber your dream ,then to make it come ture.The key is to enjoy this process.
【建议可以再斟酌一下用词,比如“丑陋”一般不直接用ugly,而用not goodlooking,“肥胖”——overweight】
I don't know what I want ,or what is my life target.And I don't know what kind of person I am .
I think many people maybe ask themselves that “what I want”,“what do I need”.And then ,what I want to do perhaps just enjoy this process.
Some people need friend ,money ,power ,sex etc.The key is whether you ever had a dream.Its noble or vulgar.Whatever,it belongs to you.
What are you suppose to do to get what you want more and to be faster.Of course,it's depends on your principle.Don't care about what others thinking about you——ugly,fat,false loftiness,selfish,arrogance,hypocrisy,all the bad words to describe
you.Remember that the others think you are unique.
Remeber your dream ,then to make it come ture.The key is to enjoy this process.
【建议可以再斟酌一下用词,比如“丑陋”一般不直接用ugly,而用not goodlooking,“肥胖”——overweight】
帮忙看下小弟的英语作文,不足之处请指出,
求帮忙看一下小弟的英语作文,有什么语法,用词错误的请指示修改下.3Q
求帮忙看一下小弟的英语作文,用词错误的请指示修改下.3Q,最后一篇求帮忙作文了.
求帮忙看一下小弟的英语作文,有什么语法,用词错误的请指示修改下.3Q,最后一篇求帮忙作文了.
请帮我看看我的这篇英语作文有基本的语法错误吗?并指出不足之处!
请帮忙看下我的英语作文,
英语的作文,请帮忙指出错误,对了请说一声
请哪位老师帮忙改改英语作文,指出错误指出,
请老师评改打分,指出不足之处。
帮忙看一篇英语作文有无语法错误并指出
求专业人士帮我改下作文,越快越好我英语作文不太好希望英语好的人帮帮忙,请指出错误并帮忙改正,
请高手帮忙看下这个句子{英语的}